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Old 05-22-2017, 12:23 AM
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how is this at all, an allegory? lol.
I get allegories in the Summer.

I take antihistamine.

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how is this at all, an allegory? lol.


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It's wonderful Grace! I'll come back later and say why. For now, I'm just going to go out back and smoke a cigarette which is especially odd since I don't smoke.
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Beautiful poem. I bet it could use a tightening up, but I said I'd find more of your poems, and I enjoyed this one as much as the last one I read from you. You are a fine word weaver -- you still around beating this ? Would love to keep reading your work as the years go along-- we ain't dead yet
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kbr! write moar. just had me "a special cig." now i am off to spam some. bye bye
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I can't imagine what more can be said about this one after the outpouring, but it sure as hell deserves it.

Any one stanza of this would have been a brilliant poem.
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