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Old 09-26-2013, 09:40 AM
fahmad27 (Offline)
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I think the script you have written is great! I read the book so I think you did a good job capturing Bruno's innocence and confusion in this scene. Personally, I find this script to be an improvement of the book. One of the things I didn't like about the book was that it took so long to get the story moving forward. Thus, I am glad this script is moving the story forward by getting straight to Bruno being upset about moving after the audience meets him.
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