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Old 04-16-2014, 06:06 AM
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Hi, I could tell your script is trying to be humorous and make us laugh. I like the part where she eats and destroys the business card of the producer Kelly wants to contact. I don't think she would have gone too far, even if she did contact him. Maybe you can extend your script to a point where she meets him? Good luck with it.
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