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Old 03-26-2018, 07:53 AM
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My first thought is that the date of 2001 going along and then when Nov. comes there is no mention of 9/11. Of course a prisoner is mostly caught up in his own life, but maybe there could be a way to work in the terror attack as meaningful to him. I like your writing and the theme of "is life worth it?" I see at the end he almost gets the answer - "it is, if you make it so."

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