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Old 03-26-2018, 07:27 AM
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Look up filtering. Had should only be imperative. RUE, resist the urge to explain. Avoid excessive adverbs, adjectives, propositions, and to be verbs. Read it aloud. If you stumble, change the line. Read a lot of works. Write and write.
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