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Old 04-12-2010, 08:09 AM
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Yes a chick type story and to the right publisher it will be a winner [try Gemini. The editor, David, is a softie for sentiment]

The first line is a matter of taste, some will like it, some not. IMHO if you can do without it, why chance a reader not continuing because of it? I didn't mind it by the way.

nice one!
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