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Old 03-13-2013, 05:06 AM
nhassan (Offline)
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Originally Posted by iDrew View Post
Not too sure how L2 works as a description of the title though.

Can I suggest that perhaps a little assonance and a smidge of alliteration would bring a greater unification to the piece.
Thank you, I will give it a try.
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