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Old 11-15-2017, 09:16 AM
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I can't believe I read the whole thing! No, I thought it a great synopsis for a great book you could write, using each portion of your life as a chapter. I could see how you might enlarge even each paragraph, adding detail, more dialog, and lots of personal details. I really enjoyed your attention to the details of your dress -- always like that in books. I had a question throughout the piece: what about your male genitalia? What sort of reaction did it get when you were intimate, or even earlier, what did you do about it in your girl times with mom. By the way, I think your mom was awesome to see what you needed and help you achieve some happiness. Are you going to make this into a book?

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