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Old 09-24-2017, 09:40 PM
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gobberlin!!!!! thanks for reading, n wats happening. and here goes the crit.

really good writing overall. no offense, but the story's really hot. some spacing issues and commas extended but very inspiring to hear from you. it makes me feel stronger as a person to feel something so devotional. you seem really passionate about writing. keep it up! lookin' forward to some great posts by you.
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