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Old 06-26-2013, 05:51 PM
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Originally Posted by gloryia View Post
'One day you'll run out of excuses - you're never on time.'

Her glance held a glimmer of amusement as she patted my hand.

'Darling, a girl has to do her best.' I'm here now, let's dance.'
This meant something different after reading the ending. Well done.

Great short story. Very enjoyable.
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