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Old 05-27-2017, 11:51 AM
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Your poetry comes off as you just talking to someone. Yeah, yeah, I know a lot more goes into it, but the end product is so plain-spoken.

Very good pierce.

This ones a little more 'wordy' than usual, like you had three cups of coffee instead of just the two.

New vitamins?
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