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Old 09-23-2017, 01:39 AM
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Originally Posted by Owen View Post
Weird, I posted a reply but it hasn't shown up. Anyway to sum up I loved the monster in this, and the description and scene building smacked of solid horror writing. The crunches and squelches and graphic munching were superbly vile!

One point though, I did not like the reference to child rape though - it was unnecessary.


Oh, I found the problem.

This story is a double post. You responded to one and then looked for it in the other.😀
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