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Old 10-26-2008, 02:10 PM
El Rons (Offline)
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Breezy, oh, I was just joshing, I know we can't win in this. I looked up your work, hope you don't mind. I read one poem, it was quite nice.

You are bitter and far from sweet
Where did you get that viper striker?
Maybe you should give it a tweak
Life is short so see things lighter not like a fighter

Take time to chew over what you have to say
For you will be unable to repeat today
Fine tune your language for all to understand
Before it puts you in trouble like nothing else can

Time for release is not on to others
Find another room to shake your feathers
Release does feel good
But not when you hurt what other people treasure
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