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Old 02-23-2010, 04:20 PM
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One piece of advice. If you are planning to direct its no big deal, but for selling something it could be. Don't write anything not seen or heard in the scene. So try not to write emotions. At one of the beginning shots where he is dissatisfied, try adding in something like him sighing to indicate that emotion.

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