Thread: Just A Phase
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Old 01-30-2010, 02:16 PM
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I'm guessing the first couple of lines are a montage. I believe the correct way of actually writing a montage is as follows.

  1. shot 1
  2. shot 2
  3. shot 3 etc
There seem to be a few voice overs. If these belong to Andrew, you need to specify it. Otherwise, not too bad.

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