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Old 07-02-2012, 04:05 PM
Rooster Smith (Offline)
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I'd like to nominate "12 stormy Hours" by Pheonix Lazarus. I'm nominating the conclusion. Here's a link.

http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=39113

The reason I went with the conclusion is, I felt people would still be taken on a crazy journy, with two different twists, and they could always go back and read the rest if you guys linked it.

Where if I nominated the first part, I feel some readers may get bored with it and not get the big pay off. Although, not nearly as much.

I think you could read only the conclusion and still get the pay off.

Why this piece? Pheonix is an extreamly good story teller. He understands story structure. And the world that this guy writes in is really well thought out.
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