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Old 04-08-2017, 03:11 PM
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Hey Bot,

Was twitching to change "game" to "gain" - usually the most useful lessons we learn are when we're ploughing through hard times.

Not comfortable with "prism is the one" as its never one thing - multi-faceted, distorted, transparent, clarified....didn't feel right for me.

I liked this - your writing has really developed.
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