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Old 09-18-2012, 11:37 PM
Rooster Smith (Offline)
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http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=41047

Hell, I think we got our first 5 Star piece already! written by a fella by the name of Salgoud, it's called, Life and the aggregation of small pleasures.

Two really strong characters.

the tale is very gripping.

Production is good. He doesn't bunch things up in big walls of text, makes good visual transitions between scenes ...

it's an easy read.
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So if you got a piece out, private message me so I won't forget to give you a return critic.
I really wanna return the favor, and I feel like I'm forgetting people ...
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