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Old 06-02-2017, 01:21 PM
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Originally Posted by AlicinMadnessdg View Post
Thanks for the insight, writing fiction is a struggle for me and you make a really good point I'd never considered. My strength is in technical writing - academic thesis, scientific journal articles, lab reports, etc. I wrote this piece for a flash fiction competition right after I heard of such a thing as "flash fiction," so it became a wild flash in the dark. I see this experience through the eyes of Leigh, and at the time that madness was occurring I felt very isolated, so maybe that is why she is such a disconnected character?

Thanks again!
Adding a few more layers per se can really brighten a piece. Good luck.
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