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Old 12-05-2017, 07:17 PM
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
So... Brian and Virginia meet, Fuck, have kids, travel to Africa, learn how to shoot pistols before she pays a couple of kids to dump his dead body in a dumpster is too long?
You don't need the 'meet', drop the kids, and Ginny's smart enough I figure to trick Brian (jumble of Brain - get it? snort) into the dumpster so she can shoot him with an elephant gun imported from Africa. We don't actually need to go to Africa do we? So boring.

Please drop the kids. I get so sick of kids. I know everybody has to have kids in their books these days but surely these days will be over soon so Let's Get Started on That!
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