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Old 11-06-2015, 05:54 AM
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In my writing experience, if an editor states 'nothing happened' it means there was a problem with the plot or there was not enough of subplot.

Remember to make a good story you need to have both 'the thing' and the 'other thing' going along to move the story.

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