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Old 10-30-2015, 10:26 AM
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Originally Posted by mcv1986 View Post
Basically I skipped over the dinner conversation where the MC ad his date are sparring off over him being a hunting guide and he not approving of hunting.
That's loaded. Lots of potential for inner conflict and conflict between the characters; and potential for humor and irony also.

Of course, without reading it, there's no way to know. Maybe take brianpatrick's cue and post something. We could talk about this until the cows come home, but without reading something, it's impossible to see whether or not it comes off as "nothing happening."
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