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Old 05-08-2006, 01:23 PM
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Titania: i'm partial to stars too and liked that one very much nice work...there even seemed to be a bit of ending in that one....i have a sudden urge to go sleep underneath the stars...but it's the middle of the day...

Dephere: less poetic than the previous stuff i've read, not boring, still well-written, interesting though

Andrew: as Titania said, there was a sense of closure at the end which was nice. nice work as wonderful as your poetry
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