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Old 05-04-2006, 06:00 PM
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Kali, that was for lack of a better word surreal. Odd certainly, but in a way I liked it simply for the unpredictability, and it was well written. 'Crimson tears' and the line about 'she danced and laughed and danced...' were a couple really nice spots. Oh, and on the second to last sentence I think you meant in two. But other than that, a nice creepy little bit of flash...

I need to do another one of these I'm going to try to later this evening, but I don't have the time or inspiration at the moment...
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