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Forum: Character Clinics 05-05-2014, 07:45 PM
Replies: 18
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Posted By writergal
I forgot to answer this question. Like...

I forgot to answer this question.

Like Enrigo, I am also curious as to how you adjusted to the move to Chicago and the relationship you forged with your aunt while there.[/QUOTE]
I was very...
Forum: Character Clinics 05-05-2014, 07:43 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon12 So it was a fairly typical childhood for a young...

So it was a fairly typical childhood for a young girl in those parts. It does sound like you had just a touch of tomboy in you but only a touch. Probably has something to do with having so many...
Forum: Character Clinics 04-27-2014, 07:49 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon6 Slim will probably be the only brother that I...

Slim will probably be the only brother that I will talk about by name . The relationship with my aunt is very strange , she is nothing like my mother and her demeanor is nothing like anything that /I...
Forum: Character Clinics 04-26-2014, 08:29 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon6 Yes, it bothers me a lot that my brother and I...

Yes, it bothers me a lot that my brother and I are no longer close . It is a very awkward relationship now.
Forum: Character Clinics 04-25-2014, 06:17 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon2 Enrigo / Rebecca

Your world is becoming much clearer now. Think back to before the rape. Try to remember what kind of child you were. Were there other kids around your age that you use to run with or was it mainly...
Forum: Character Clinics 04-23-2014, 06:23 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon8 [QUOTE=Enrigo;648639]So let's see if we got this...

[QUOTE=Enrigo;648639]So let's see if we got this right. From your viewpoint you are now 22 years old and the year is 1982. The story you are wanting to tell covers your life during the 60's and 70's...
Forum: Character Clinics 04-23-2014, 12:31 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon8 Yes, it bothers me that my brother and I are not...

Yes, it bothers me that my brother and I are not close,we barely speak. I have heard that he has turned to alcohol
Forum: Character Clinics 04-21-2014, 05:51 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Nacia /Rebecca

The story takes place in the 60's . I will later tell about how the rape was a turning point that changed my life and sent me on a different path . The story I am telling is about overcoming...
Forum: Character Clinics 04-20-2014, 05:38 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon6 Rebecca

I was born in 1960, but my life changing event occurred in 1968 or 1969 I try to forget. I live in the United States, Mississippi a rural area. I moved to Chicago with my Aunt , my Mom’s sister...
Forum: Tips & Advice 04-19-2014, 07:03 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,149
Posted By writergal
As one poster said , as a comedy yes !

As one poster said , as a comedy yes !
Forum: Character Clinics 04-19-2014, 05:40 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,651
Posted By writergal
Icon3 Rebecca

Rebecca

Hi my name is Rebecca! There is nothing special about me that I can think of . I have one Brother Bill we call him Slim . I was a victim of rape at a young age around 7 or 8 I try to...
Forum: The SPaG Workshop 04-19-2014, 04:54 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,402
Posted By writergal
My mother thought the name Bill—we called him...

My mother thought the name Bill—we called him Slim—would assure him of his rightful place in society.” I have to ask something. Why would naming him Bill assure him his place in society? Is there...
Forum: The SPaG Workshop 04-16-2014, 07:44 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,402
Posted By writergal
Icon6 The bingo winnerís daughter (2)

I hope I have made some improvement. I am terrible with comma's . I also nothing about writing dialogue. Thanks in advance for shredding me Ninjas.

The wind was brisk that day, the smell of...
Forum: The SPaG Workshop 04-16-2014, 07:11 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,776
Posted By writergal
Lisa Green

THE BINGO WINNER’S DAUGHTER

If I had only learned to sit without an arch in my back and sip tea, maybe things would have been different. Reads a little odd, so I might suggest rewording this...
Forum: Poetry 04-12-2014, 09:02 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,280
Posted By writergal
I really liked this and the title is perfect .

I really liked this and the title is perfect .
Forum: The Notice Board 04-10-2014, 04:50 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 12,162
Posted By writergal
I loooove this board ,it is so helpful ! I am...

I loooove this board ,it is so helpful ! I am charging you all for my new dress though ,it was riiiiiiped to shreds by you !! Harsh but helpful !
Forum: Introductions 04-10-2014, 02:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 423
Posted By writergal
Welcome Erin ! I am new too and looooving this...

Welcome Erin ! I am new too and looooving this site so far.
Forum: Poetry 04-07-2014, 05:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 387
Posted By writergal
Thank You I am glad you liked it :)

Thank You I am glad you liked it :)
Forum: The SPaG Workshop 04-06-2014, 11:00 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,776
Posted By writergal
Icon11 The bingo winnerís daughter

THE BINGO WINNERíS DAUGHTER
If I had only learned to sit without an arch in my back and sip tea, maybe things would have been different. They say you attract people by what you exude, I guess I...
Forum: Poetry 04-06-2014, 10:19 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 387
Posted By writergal
Thank you , that was the part that I did not like...

Thank you , that was the part that I did not like either but could not think of anything else. Sometimes it's the simplest things that throw me way off in a story or poem.
Forum: Poetry 04-06-2014, 08:38 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 387
Posted By writergal
Icon12 Coffee House Blues

Coffee House Blues
I am not hiding behind treeís or in smoke filled rooms
I am not kneeling behind buildings covering my head with disappointment
Nor lurking in shadows of dark alleys as a...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-06-2014, 08:35 AM
Replies: 69
Views: 18,895
Posted By writergal
Loving this !!!!!

Loving this !!!!!
Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Ė Poetry Tools and Lessons 04-06-2014, 08:30 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 4,192
Posted By writergal
I like the poem but as someone else said the...

I like the poem but as someone else said the message in a bottle is cliche'. trust me I am the queen of cliche' most times with out knowing it. That is one of the reasons I am here for help.
Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Ė Poetry Tools and Lessons 04-06-2014, 08:28 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 3,369
Posted By writergal
I really like this !

I really like this !
Forum: Introductions 04-05-2014, 08:53 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 536
Posted By writergal
Icon14 Thank you , I am excited about sharing with you...

Thank you , I am excited about sharing with you all !
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