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Forum: Fiction 06-27-2008, 12:44 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,871
Posted By Joewood
Big thumbs up to you captainnapalm, Was in...

Big thumbs up to you captainnapalm,

Was in need of a good laugh today ;)

One little thing: you repeat 'swashbuckling acrobatics' a couple of times in the same paragraph.

Other than that,...
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2008, 10:55 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,702
Posted By Joewood
Hi Pepper, Thanks for taking the time to...

Hi Pepper,

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
May I point out that I had updated this piece a couple of posts above yours ;)

Cheers,
Forum: Fiction 06-02-2008, 02:03 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,741
Posted By Joewood
Hi there fellow Antipodean, I'm originally...

Hi there fellow Antipodean,

I'm originally from the other Country down that neck of the woods :shifty:

Anyway, I did find trepidatious here:...
Forum: Fiction 06-02-2008, 01:09 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,765
Posted By Joewood
Perceptions of Guilt - Chapter Two (894 words)

Hello everyone,
It has been a while since I first posted this here... and more changes :p


Chapter Two


Allegra is aware that she is lying in an awkward and uncomfortable position but she...
Forum: Fiction 06-02-2008, 01:04 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,702
Posted By Joewood
Perceptions of Guilt - Chapter One (943 words)

Hello everyone,
It has been a while since I first posted this here... and lots of little changes :p

Chapter One


The bar is warm and inviting. The bitter cold has driven people inside...
Forum: Fiction 05-29-2008, 11:55 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,724
Posted By Joewood
Hi there Hank, I enjoyed this interesting...

Hi there Hank,
I enjoyed this interesting story...

In my opinion this piece could be developed into something longer. Having said that it stands well alone too.

But the title made me think...
Forum: Fiction 05-29-2008, 08:41 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,741
Posted By Joewood
Hi there SynonymousWords, First off, nice...

Hi there SynonymousWords,

First off, nice little story with an unexpected ending, an enjoyable read.

Couple of things I spotted:
Forum: Fiction 05-27-2008, 04:34 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,231
Posted By Joewood
An enjoyable read with a nice little twist at the...

An enjoyable read with a nice little twist at the end...

Couple of small things as follows:

Thatís when I saw the Shadow Guy following me. He was in his car. He stopped, got out, yelled out:...
Forum: Introductions 05-26-2008, 12:58 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 820
Posted By Joewood
Hi there Penfinger, Welcome to the Beat. :)...

Hi there Penfinger,

Welcome to the Beat. :)
Look forward to seeing you around.
Forum: Introductions 04-23-2008, 11:12 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 851
Posted By Joewood
Congrats and welcome to WB :)

Congrats and welcome to WB :)
Forum: Introductions 02-15-2008, 04:20 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 6,830
Posted By Joewood
:shifty: better not let anyone in the real world...

:shifty: better not let anyone in the real world hear you say that... *would just ruin my hard core rep*

;) Between you, me and the wall, it's always nice to hear...
Forum: Fiction 02-13-2008, 06:20 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,125
Posted By Joewood
Of course I do... REALLY! I get to choose...

Of course I do... REALLY!

I get to choose whether I physically go into the office or work from home - a balance is required...

The people I work with appreciate my excentric nature - not...
Forum: Fiction 02-13-2008, 06:08 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,125
Posted By Joewood
Thankfully no, I'm overworked but well paid and...

Thankfully no, I'm overworked but well paid and all overtime is paid over and above my salary - so no complaints there... I'm a happy girl really just overworked!
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-13-2008, 06:04 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 754
Posted By Joewood
You'll be fine Kal - I'm sure of it - you'll...

You'll be fine Kal - I'm sure of it - you'll muster up your usual pirate grace and get your point across in the most effective way possible...
Forum: Fiction 02-13-2008, 05:56 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,125
Posted By Joewood
Hi Jimbo, Have not forgotten you - honest -...

Hi Jimbo,

Have not forgotten you - honest - just over worked :(
I promised I will get around to reading the next installment...
Forum: Introductions 02-13-2008, 05:52 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 6,830
Posted By Joewood
Hi Dan, I'm grateful to you for encouraging...

Hi Dan,

I'm grateful to you for encouraging Jim, I loved Bernie and Ralph 18 months ago... Obviously, still do...

Look forward to reading your scribbling ;)
Forum: Fiction 02-06-2008, 11:51 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,125
Posted By Joewood
Good Morning Jimbo, Once again I'm at work...

Good Morning Jimbo,

Once again I'm at work - just letting you know I'll be back...
With Comments!

How's the amazing Girl in your life this morning? Belly full I hope ;)
Forum: Board Games 02-06-2008, 12:31 AM
Replies: 12,150
Views: 254,610
Posted By Joewood
I am sending positive vibes and energy to Maylet...

I am sending positive vibes and energy to Maylet - wishing her all the best for the long hard day!
Forum: Fiction 02-06-2008, 12:24 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,162
Posted By Joewood
Hey there Jimbo, Feed your daughter first,...

Hey there Jimbo,

Feed your daughter first, bless the hungry baby...

I agree with Icarus, trim don't axe. Start snipping mate...
Still had me chuckling out loud!

Okay I see we are back to...
Forum: Fiction 02-05-2008, 05:53 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 4,087
Posted By Joewood
Squinting myself... ;) and that's with my...

Squinting myself... ;) and that's with my glasses!
Couple of tiny little things 1) '... and abruptly moved one massive hand to grab Ralph by the throat.' I would say grabbing Ralph by the throat!...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-05-2008, 05:06 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,261
Posted By Joewood
:nono: Now, now, I seem to remember not so long...

:nono: Now, now, I seem to remember not so long ago - in your fine Country - kids were being taught that the Holocaust never happened and was in fact propaganda :eek: Every Country has stupid...
Forum: Board Games 02-05-2008, 12:44 AM
Replies: 12,150
Views: 254,610
Posted By Joewood
I am congratulating Jimbo big time for his baby...

I am congratulating Jimbo big time for his baby daughter...
Obviously no need asking what you've been up to in the last 18 months... ;)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-05-2008, 12:13 AM
Replies: 103
Views: 4,563
Posted By Joewood
Good to have you back... :p

Good to have you back... :p
Forum: Fiction 02-04-2008, 11:53 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,162
Posted By Joewood
Hi Jimbo, Long, long time... Currently at...

Hi Jimbo,

Long, long time...
Currently at work but reserving my spot!
Had almost given up on discovering what the two likely lads get up to... ;)
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-27-2008, 11:52 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,299
Posted By Joewood
When my mother used that argument, I pointed out...

When my mother used that argument, I pointed out that it was highly unlikely that my pristine underwear (ironed by my mother) would remain pristine for long if I really was run over by some 4 wheeled...
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