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Forum: Fiction 02-17-2011, 04:39 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 677
Posted By gunner
Thanks for reading, Quesadilla. I appreciate you...

Thanks for reading, Quesadilla. I appreciate you taking the time to read and add your comments.
Forum: Free Writing 02-17-2011, 03:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,513
Posted By gunner
Nice little piece of flash fiction with a...

Nice little piece of flash fiction with a surprise ending. Well done.
Forum: Free Writing 02-15-2011, 09:37 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,168
Posted By gunner
Thanks for the comments, Gaines. Your points are...

Thanks for the comments, Gaines. Your points are well taken. At this time the story is living in my "Story Ideas" file, so I'll add your comments to the file for future reference.
Forum: Free Writing 02-14-2011, 03:45 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,822
Posted By gunner
Thanks for reading, Shelly, and thanks for the...

Thanks for reading, Shelly, and thanks for the link. Very interesting. Twilight Zone was one of my favorite shows.
Forum: Fiction 02-13-2011, 03:29 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 677
Posted By gunner
Strictly Speaking

Strictly Speaking


"It all started when I changed my clock for daylight savings time."

"What started?"

"I moved the clock ahead one hour. You know, in the fall, its fall...
Forum: Free Writing 02-12-2011, 01:12 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 736
Posted By gunner
Very funny, Shelly. Enjoyed the read. You might...

Very funny, Shelly. Enjoyed the read. You might want to think about submitting somewhere for next Valentine's day, starting maybe as early as October.
Forum: Free Writing 02-11-2011, 07:17 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,822
Posted By gunner
Gaines, thank you for the detailed review of my...

Gaines, thank you for the detailed review of my piece. I agree I can get wordy at times. Throwing in words such as “just” and “that”, in most cases, add nothing to the meaning of the sentence. I...
Forum: Free Writing 02-10-2011, 05:06 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,822
Posted By gunner
A good thought, Justified. I had not planned on...

A good thought, Justified. I had not planned on expanding the piece, it was just something I did while free writing, but I guess there is story material there. Thank you for taking your time to...
Forum: Free Writing 02-09-2011, 12:57 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,168
Posted By gunner
CherriedQED, thanks for reading and commenting. ...

CherriedQED, thanks for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated.
Forum: Free Writing 02-09-2011, 03:50 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,822
Posted By gunner
Nadja, thanks for reading and commenting. I have...

Nadja, thanks for reading and commenting. I have made the corrections you pointed out.

Redlorry, thanks for taking the time to read and add your comments.
Forum: Free Writing 02-08-2011, 12:54 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,822
Posted By gunner
Thanks to someone for correcting the title. Very...

Thanks to someone for correcting the title. Very nice of you.
Forum: Free Writing 02-07-2011, 04:55 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,822
Posted By gunner
All aboard the train of life

The train of life pulls from the station and carries us all to the final destination. From the town of Birth, the train will proceed toward the city of Death… All aboard.

The schedule is not...
Forum: Free Writing 02-05-2011, 12:52 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,168
Posted By gunner
Thanks for your comment, David. Although I have...

Thanks for your comment, David. Although I have not tried to develop this into a story just yet, I agree a rewrite would be in order. Thanks again.
Forum: Free Writing 02-05-2011, 04:52 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,168
Posted By gunner
Thanks for reading and taking the time to...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, Amia.
Forum: Fiction 02-02-2011, 06:13 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 621
Posted By gunner
I agree with Cuchulain's statement, it is more ...

I agree with Cuchulain's statement, it is more commentary than fiction. I should have posted it elsewhere.
J. Newman and turncoat, thanks so much for taking the time to comment. Your points are...
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2011, 04:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 621
Posted By gunner
Thanks for taking the time to comment, Cuchulain.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, Cuchulain.
Forum: Free Writing 02-01-2011, 04:17 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,168
Posted By gunner
A Dancer'

I have to say, I have had a terrible time trying to edit this so the layout was correct. It seems the more I try, the worse it becomes. Sorry.


A Dancer's Death



Mildred Fay was...
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2011, 04:08 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 621
Posted By gunner
What goes around, comes around.

Someone mentioned the other day, over coffee, that the paper novel was nearing its death. It was destined to fade away; the e-book and the electronic readers were the future. Someday soon, you...
Forum: Free Writing 03-13-2009, 05:06 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 853
Posted By gunner
This may help. You have to scroll down a page or...

This may help. You have to scroll down a page or so, once at the site.

http://www.case.edu/artsci/engl/emmons/writing/assignments/Horsburgh_Freewriting.pdf
Forum: Free Writing 01-31-2008, 03:37 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,526
Posted By gunner
Never mind...

Never mind...
Forum: Fiction 01-31-2008, 03:21 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,202
Posted By gunner
Please continue with your writing. it all starts...

Please continue with your writing. it all starts with a character, a thought, a scene, a happening, a dream, an experience...whatever, it is a start. And from there, who knows?
Forum: Free Writing 01-31-2008, 10:29 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 849
Posted By gunner
Thanks for reading and adding your comments,...

Thanks for reading and adding your comments, Cordatus. I did make the change from "seems" to "seemed". I believe that is correct

You are welcome to fix the paragraphing.

Again, thanks for...
Forum: Free Writing 01-30-2008, 04:58 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,526
Posted By gunner
Thanks for clearing it up for me, Queen Of Wands.

Thanks for clearing it up for me, Queen Of Wands.
Forum: Free Writing 01-30-2008, 04:44 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,526
Posted By gunner
Let's see. Black wolf wrote this thing, right? ...

Let's see. Black wolf wrote this thing, right?

Well, the comments following Queen Of Wands entry went over my head. Sorry.

I guess it was well worded, but a little over board, I think????...
Forum: Fiction 01-30-2008, 04:26 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,403
Posted By gunner
You remind me that it takes belief in ones self...

You remind me that it takes belief in ones self to become a good writer.

I think you are on the right road. Keep at it.

Good luck.
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