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Forum: Free Writing 04-12-2017, 02:35 AM
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Posted By Nick Pierce
Honey, this ain't about guns. It is about using...

Honey, this ain't about guns. It is about using words to describe pictures of an event at a bus stop.

Now stop casting glances at my faded Levi's, willya?
People are starting to notice.
Forum: Free Writing 04-11-2017, 03:49 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,218
Posted By Nick Pierce
Nick, why have you quoted this? Mr....

Nick, why have you quoted this?


Mr. Pierce, I am doing what I can to provide an example of mixing showing with telling.


*sigh*
Very well, Nicholaus.
Carry on.
*sigh*
Forum: Free Writing 01-11-2013, 01:48 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,218
Posted By Nick Pierce
I'm grateful the battle vet didn't use a knife....

I'm grateful the battle vet didn't use a knife. Ya cut an artery and voila! AIDS in the air.

[uhh, for all you p.c.* sensitive types- this is not meant to cast a stigma on AIDS nor is it meant...
Forum: Free Writing 01-10-2013, 01:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,218
Posted By Nick Pierce
Gun Control

So it's a nice afternoon and I'm sittin' at a bus stop. Been glancin' at a girl that's also sittin' there. An old guy with a grey goatee, no- wait a minute- that's called a Van Dyke, is readin' a...
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