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Forum: Fiction 07-19-2008, 10:14 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,211
Posted By Kelose
oy! I meant to reconstruct the final sentence as...

oy! I meant to reconstruct the final sentence as you suggested ealier, the foreshadowing is unessisary. I'll do that tomorrow, I've grown mighty tired. I'll sleep on it though.

(I'm finishing up...
Forum: Fiction 07-19-2008, 08:01 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,345
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Edited.

Edited.
Forum: Fiction 07-19-2008, 08:00 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,211
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Edited.

Edited.
Forum: Fiction 07-16-2008, 04:49 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,776
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Got through part 2 and 3 with no grind, well...

Got through part 2 and 3 with no grind, well done, you've entertained me (that's hard to do, by the way). I liked both parts, especially part three, bank robbery always seems to interest me. Now, I'm...
Forum: Poetry 07-10-2008, 06:04 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 986
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 yes I do, actually. Thank you for pointing that...

yes I do, actually. Thank you for pointing that out, Q.
Forum: Fiction 07-10-2008, 05:33 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,776
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Well, I hope you do post the second part, I'd...

Well, I hope you do post the second part, I'd really like to read it. I thought your story was great, a good start for somthing crazy! (hopefully) Anyway, like Winterbite stated earlier, I didn't...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-24-2008, 12:06 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 798
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Any Ideas?

Although I primarily write horror and suspence, I've recently had the earge to whip up some fantasy. Anywho, I'm having trouble creating a village name. But before you throw suggestions my way, let...
Forum: Fiction 06-18-2008, 05:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,211
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 will do, Raven, and thanks!

will do, Raven, and thanks!
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2008, 08:37 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,211
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Ello again. Once again, House, great advise...

Ello again. Once again, House, great advise (especially on the Berretta U22 thing. I went back over today and changed it as you suggested, I didn't bother with switching the type of gun, though, that...
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2008, 08:31 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,211
Posted By Kelose
hello again, Nemesis, always a pleasure to see...

hello again, Nemesis, always a pleasure to see you. I feel that I need to explain a few things. In the paragraph that you were confused about the timeline, looking back I realize how confusing I made...
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2008, 08:10 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,345
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 yes, Arc should have goten a picture or some form...

yes, Arc should have goten a picture or some form of ID before he went on his montage, but unfortuntaly, this story was written in ten minutes at work so, alot of mistakes were made. I'm glad you...
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2008, 08:03 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,345
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 No, actually I've never played Hitman, although,...

No, actually I've never played Hitman, although, it does look attractive. I do whatch the Bourne movies alot, and Shooter, Stalingrad and other movies similar.

You've given me alot of great...
Forum: Fiction 06-15-2008, 06:30 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,211
Posted By Kelose
Icon1 Arc (part ii. aprox 1700 words)

Arc



Part II



By, Vernon Smith
Forum: Fiction 06-10-2008, 04:21 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,345
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 thanx, ehoeveler, I enjoyed writing it. Believe...

thanx, ehoeveler, I enjoyed writing it. Believe it or not, I wrote this one in 10 ten minutes, so yea, that's how engaging it was. Im glad you liked it and I deeply apreciate the read. More is to...
Forum: Inkster Incorporated 06-08-2008, 12:06 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,579
Posted By Kelose
Although I havn't tried my luck at the Mangas,...

Although I havn't tried my luck at the Mangas, I've always been attracted to the anime series. I don't see myself ever actually reading the mangas there's just too much going on in one page. But if...
Forum: Inkster Incorporated 06-08-2008, 11:36 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,485
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 well said. I'd struggle for and hour with LOTR,...

well said. I'd struggle for and hour with LOTR, it's just got an older feel to it. HP was so much easier too read and I enjoyed it alot more too. I'd choose HP over LOTR.
Forum: Fiction 06-06-2008, 03:40 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,345
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Arc, the Legend (aprox. 1300 wrds.)

This is a little somthing I cranked out during my lunch break. It's a stray from my style but, in my opinion, It's better than most my other work. I know there are problems with it, there always is...
Forum: Poetry 05-19-2008, 04:17 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 721
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 I liked this poem, although my understanding of...

I liked this poem, although my understanding of it was limited. However, I did get the jist of it and by "his mark I will not take" I assumed refered to the mark of the beast, the number 666. Am I...
Forum: Poetry 05-19-2008, 04:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 804
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 I think they both are brilliant, not too wordy...

I think they both are brilliant, not too wordy and confusing, I love them! However, I'd have to say i like the second one best because it kinda tells more of a story as far as the organization goes....
Forum: Fiction 05-19-2008, 03:49 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 875
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 perhaps another mistake...

perhaps another mistake...
Forum: Fiction 05-18-2008, 06:27 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 875
Posted By Kelose
Wow, thank you Devon. I thought I'd never get a...

Wow, thank you Devon. I thought I'd never get a response on this one but after reading over your suggestion I would agree, perhaps it is a bit too rich. So I'll take your suggestion and tone down...
Forum: Poetry 05-16-2008, 08:03 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,093
Posted By Kelose
very true to life poem.

very true to life poem.
Forum: Poetry 05-16-2008, 08:00 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 986
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Darkness

(just something short and off the top of my head. I guess its more like a chant than an actual poem but, whatever.)

Darkness


This darkness, oh this darkness,
a healthful hopeful friend....
Forum: Poetry 05-15-2008, 04:21 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 998
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 Loved the way your poem flowed it was like the...

Loved the way your poem flowed it was like the words just tumbled from my lips. Excellent poem, excellent poet.
Forum: Board Games 05-15-2008, 04:15 PM
Replies: 10,582
Views: 219,197
Posted By Kelose
Icon6 3663, your welcome

3663, your welcome
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