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Forum: Fiction 07-12-2008, 02:18 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,237
Posted By kDuBois
Wow! A great big thank you to Greg for your...

Wow! A great big thank you to Greg for your critique. I will definately use much (if not all) of your advice. "Was's" are my greatest foe and I'll totally go genocidal on them.

I am also looking...
Forum: Fiction 07-11-2008, 01:12 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,237
Posted By kDuBois
Hi, thank you for reading my story. Yes this is...

Hi, thank you for reading my story.
Yes this is a rough draft and feel free to critique both grammer/spelling and flow. I feel both are important.
Forum: Fiction 07-11-2008, 01:09 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,446
Posted By kDuBois
Hi, liked the first chapter very much, but agree...

Hi, liked the first chapter very much, but agree with what everyone else was saying about posting the second chapter.
There was just one thing that bothered me, (and I'm really nit picking). The...
Forum: Fiction 07-11-2008, 12:30 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,237
Posted By kDuBois
Little Graveyard short story

Hi this is my first post, its a short story I wrote this winter. Enjoy!

Little Graveyard

Where was it? It couldn’t be far now, could it? Landis ran through the woods, his lanky form dodging...
Forum: Scripts 07-09-2008, 11:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,642
Posted By kDuBois
Too bad about the lost passion and all that, but...

Too bad about the lost passion and all that, but thank you for the suggestion.
Although I love westerns I usually take them in film form. Every time I go to the book store I check the depressingly...
Forum: Fiction 07-09-2008, 07:24 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,197
Posted By kDuBois
Hi, I really liked your prologue, but what's the...

Hi, I really liked your prologue, but what's the name of the novel its for?
Very compelling and I liked the names you chose for your characters.
-KD
Forum: Fiction 07-09-2008, 06:59 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,673
Posted By kDuBois
narrator

Hi, I really enjoyed your story. It was very refreshing and compelling. There's only one thing that sort of grinds my gears: Who is the narrator narrating to?

While I was reading the story I...
Forum: Scripts 07-09-2008, 06:30 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,642
Posted By kDuBois
Hi, I'm relatively new here. I absolutely love...

Hi, I'm relatively new here. I absolutely love westerns, can I still sign up for this? I could totally be a native. Please respond even if I'm barking up the wrong tree. Hmmm? If I get to be an...
Forum: Fiction 07-03-2008, 06:51 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,048
Posted By kDuBois
Hi, I thought this chapter was very compelling...

Hi, I thought this chapter was very compelling despite what other people had to say about whether you were giving enough insight into the characters.
I thought that leaving the character's emotions...
Forum: Introductions 07-02-2008, 11:25 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 716
Posted By kDuBois
Icon6 Hiya!!

Hi I'm new here.
I love writing and am trying to write my first novel this summer. Before this novel dealie I did mostly short stories, and even before that I wrote some cheesy high school poetry....
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