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Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 04:17 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,108
Posted By fishbait
The story is compelling. The pace reminds me of...

The story is compelling. The pace reminds me of shooting a pistol, Pow! 1, Pow! 2, Pow! 3, Pow! 4, Pow! 5, Pow! 6, click. (Its empty). I like, that you don't try to write where it sounds smart, you...
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-28-2012, 04:37 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 877
Posted By fishbait
You are correct. I might get more readers if I...

You are correct. I might get more readers if I changed my nickname. i am also an old fogey on a pension. Sorry that I went off so hard.
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-27-2012, 01:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 877
Posted By fishbait
You are supposed to critique the writing. Not...

You are supposed to critique the writing. Not who would read it, in what setting, or who it would be of interest to--or of all things, my nick name. My name is Fisher and Fishbait was one of the...
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-26-2012, 03:20 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 877
Posted By fishbait
Thanks for the critique. The reading out loud...

Thanks for the critique. The reading out loud bit is good, nothing specific mentioned but I will give it a try. Your other suggestions will not be remembered.
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-26-2012, 09:50 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 4,829
Posted By fishbait
Interesting. Is this simply a movie review or an...

Interesting. Is this simply a movie review or an attempt to get the word out?
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-24-2012, 04:12 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,008
Posted By fishbait
Nice piece, we too love to have dogs around. We...

Nice piece, we too love to have dogs around. We had a 15 yr old hinds that we had to have put down last Dec. The end of June this year, we twisted off and ended up with two pups. We had meant to...
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-22-2012, 05:08 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 877
Posted By fishbait
A Romp Through Childhood With Glenn 3500 words

A Romp Through Childhood With Glenn

I had just hit my drive and started down the cart path, when I stopped to do a little engineering on the hangnail that was bugging me, you know, the little...
Forum: Fiction 09-20-2012, 01:31 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 567
Posted By fishbait
My first attempt also, I must say that I enjoyed...

My first attempt also, I must say that I enjoyed writing to a chosen subject.

I have read your entry into the contest. I will say that it is exquisite. I could say that mine is stupendous, but...
Forum: Fiction 09-20-2012, 03:54 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 567
Posted By fishbait
Abdula Thanks for the kind words. I have an...

Abdula
Thanks for the kind words. I have an entry in the "Message in a Bottle contest if you have a chance to glance at it. You're my first reply, so I'll always see your name.
Fish
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2012, 05:22 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 567
Posted By fishbait
Let It Happen To Maurice - 2000 words

:addspace:Short Story 2000 words

This story results from an optional exercise that I performed as instructed from Stephen King, in his book for wannabe writers, “On Writing.” Many of you have...
Forum: Fiction 09-18-2012, 04:13 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,173
Posted By fishbait
Everyone has demons. Appreciating the little...

Everyone has demons. Appreciating the little things helps but is not a cure all. Just my opinion. People are caught up with jobs, marriage, child raising, etc. I think happy people are happy when...
Forum: Fiction 09-15-2012, 06:09 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,988
Posted By fishbait
Gingerfox

I read it thru while many, I stop halfway. You have a way of making the reader think. Nice piece.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-15-2012, 05:54 AM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 215,602
Posted By fishbait
Your feet are dirty from midnight wanderings and...

Your feet are dirty from midnight wanderings and you don't wnat to soil the sheets.lol

I'm random to a fault.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-14-2012, 03:15 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 4,368
Posted By fishbait
Why Do I Write

I like to do it. Maybe sense of accomplishment, maybe the stories are in me and have to come out. Makes me feel good.
Forum: Previous Contests 09-14-2012, 07:58 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 7,139
Posted By fishbait
THE BOTTLE PREDICAMENT Jonathan stood...

THE BOTTLE PREDICAMENT
Jonathan stood mesmerized and looked at the Atlantic surf, pounding; the individual waves coming in groups, an army marching in rows, all different yet the same, headed for...
Forum: Introductions 09-14-2012, 07:08 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 362
Posted By fishbait
Introduction

Hello, I'm fishbait. Been writing for nine months. I really enjoy creative writing but have learned to detest cleaning up the manuscript. I've written a fiction novel and several short stories so...
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