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Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-19-2017, 04:13 PM
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Posted By DwayneA
still sounds confusing to me

still sounds confusing to me
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-19-2017, 02:59 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 898
Posted By DwayneA
What Makes A Plot Strong?

I have read online concensus' for various films on Rottentomatoes and certain game reviews on gamespot about them having a thin plot. Exactly what is meant by a thin plot? What's the difference...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-29-2017, 02:33 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,108
Posted By DwayneA
Author Laziness

I frequently hear in reviewer comments about "laziness on behalf of the author" and how the story could have been much better if the author had done more work. Recently, I finished reading the entire...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-30-2017, 11:07 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
I've been thinking of ideas of how his...

I've been thinking of ideas of how his nyctophobia could have gotten the best of him, destroying both his career and his reputation. So far the only idea I've gotten is that the moment occurs during...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-16-2017, 11:22 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,695
Posted By DwayneA
Um, what the heck does that mean?

Um, what the heck does that mean?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-16-2017, 09:19 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,695
Posted By DwayneA
I've actually had dreams of some of the scenes he...

I've actually had dreams of some of the scenes he is in, particularily his death scene.

You know you're a tragic villain when the ghosts of your parents actually join forces with the hero to stop...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-13-2017, 09:46 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,695
Posted By DwayneA
I'm just sharing some of my ideas and was looking...

I'm just sharing some of my ideas and was looking for some feedback on if they sound good and fit the character I want to create.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-13-2017, 08:54 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,695
Posted By DwayneA
Actually, the villain I had in mind had these...

Actually, the villain I had in mind had these traits:

-He's the most feared wizard to have ever existed in the realm. He was born the son of a sorceress and a pure-blood human astronomer. His...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-12-2017, 10:03 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,695
Posted By DwayneA
Tragic Villain

In my opinion this is the only kind of villainous antagonist that the reader can sympathize with. The villain of the story I plan to write to complete the trilogy of mod for the game I'm working on...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-13-2017, 05:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,191
Posted By DwayneA
right now I don't have any work to show. I only...

right now I don't have any work to show. I only have ideas for this character. What I'm asking for are suggestions or comments on how it looks so far.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-12-2017, 06:43 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,191
Posted By DwayneA
no I don't drink coffee? Why?

no I don't drink coffee? Why?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-12-2017, 10:03 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,191
Posted By DwayneA
Ideas For My Lead Female

I've already discussed some ideas for the protagonist of the story I am planning for the third and final part in a trilogy for a game mod that I will write a trilogy of books based on after it is...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-09-2017, 07:51 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
I haven't even started the writing yet. First I...

I haven't even started the writing yet. First I need to put together ideas for the characters and the plot to develop them before I can start writing.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-09-2017, 05:08 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
so far, it's what I've got planned. I'm asking...

so far, it's what I've got planned. I'm asking for your opinion how it all looks so far.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-09-2017, 02:53 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
that's just part of his ultimate character...

that's just part of his ultimate character growth. In the end, with help from his friends, lover, and mentor, he saves both worlds and the human race, confronting his greatest fear in the process and...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-08-2017, 02:22 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
Oh right, I almost forgot. He starts off feeling...

Oh right, I almost forgot. He starts off feeling that he has no purpose with nothing left to live for. But as the story progresses, he slowly through the friendships he develops, the role he plays in...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-08-2017, 12:24 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,434
Posted By DwayneA
Ideas For My Protagonist

I've finished writing the story for part 2 in the trilogy I am planning for a game. I'll soon be starting the third and final part. In the future, I'll be writing a trilogy of books based on the mod....
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 04-08-2017, 05:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,339
Posted By DwayneA
well if anyone can make some suggestions for how...

well if anyone can make some suggestions for how to make it more realistic, let me know.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 04-08-2017, 08:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,339
Posted By DwayneA
Creating My Own Fictional World

For six year now, I have been working on a trilogy mod for a game. I have already completed the first part, and will very soon be completing part 2. And then I'll be starting the final chapter.

I...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-04-2017, 09:26 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,241
Posted By DwayneA
Then why do critics point out derrivative writing...

Then why do critics point out derrivative writing in works like the Eragon series?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-04-2017, 08:49 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,241
Posted By DwayneA
then how are modern writers supposed to create...

then how are modern writers supposed to create something completely original?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-04-2017, 08:04 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,241
Posted By DwayneA
I've read that Paolini borrowed elements from...

I've read that Paolini borrowed elements from Star Wars and Lord of the Rings. What elements are those?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-03-2017, 08:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,241
Posted By DwayneA
Derrivative Writing

I read on wikipedia about the Eragon book series that the biggest criticism about the series was that the writing is "too derrivative". What does this mean? And how do you avoid this in your writing?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-26-2016, 06:19 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 7,262
Posted By DwayneA
I found something online about two other programs...

I found something online about two other programs called Storyweaver and Dramatica. Has anyone had any experience with either?
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-18-2016, 10:28 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 7,262
Posted By DwayneA
Isn't Grammarly a browser only tool?

Isn't Grammarly a browser only tool?
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