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Forum: Fiction 11-27-2013, 01:37 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,314
Posted By Christine
Thanks for your comments.

Thanks for your comments.
Forum: Fiction 11-25-2013, 02:07 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,314
Posted By Christine
A Very Short Gentle Ghost Story

FLOATING

The sun shines through the bedroom window. I wish I was out there but I have to rest my ankle.

I think of Starlight, my pony. I shouldn’t have tried to make him jump the fence. I...
Forum: The Library 11-18-2013, 02:16 PM
Replies: 3,722
Views: 295,321
Posted By Christine
The Count of Monte Cristo, Vol I.

The Count of Monte Cristo, Vol I.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-10-2013, 01:59 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 593
Posted By Christine
How about "Yes, and I talked to an old buddy of...

How about "Yes, and I talked to an old buddy of mine who'll be contacting you. The name's Dr Oldwyn."
Forum: Introductions 11-10-2013, 01:41 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 648
Posted By Christine
Welcome

Hello Htins:seeya:
Forum: Fiction 11-07-2013, 02:06 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,585
Posted By Christine
Ooh, I need to know everything that went before. ...

Ooh, I need to know everything that went before. Very good piece of writing. Good luck with it.
Forum: Board Games 11-07-2013, 01:33 PM
Replies: 9,470
Views: 208,839
Posted By Christine
The hands fell

The hands fell
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-07-2013, 01:16 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,263
Posted By Christine
I think you've definitely found your title.

I think you've definitely found your title.
Forum: Poetry 11-05-2013, 02:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 537
Posted By Christine
Wind can make your eyes water so I thought the...

Wind can make your eyes water so I thought the first line was excellent - it's saying what the wind can do to a person... cause tears without sorrow. But then the second line takes a different...
Forum: Poetry 11-05-2013, 01:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 664
Posted By Christine
I thought it was a good poem and just the right...

I thought it was a good poem and just the right length. And, in my opinion, the title as you'd presented it fitted the piece exactly. It didn't take me long to work out that the title is 'Seriously...
Forum: Fiction 11-04-2013, 01:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 878
Posted By Christine
Apart from all the mistakes (tray of golden...

Apart from all the mistakes (tray of golden loves; bare feel etc) this piece held my attention.
Forum: Fiction 11-04-2013, 01:28 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,204
Posted By Christine
You don't have to say the marble is the floor...

You don't have to say the marble is the floor because you tell the reader that 'he is standing on the other side of the door'.
Forum: Board Games 11-04-2013, 12:42 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,970
Posted By Christine
You can't do that! That makes the word...

You can't do that! That makes the word 'applespear', which doesn't make sense. Try again. There's other letters to go off.
Forum: Board Games 11-03-2013, 02:54 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,970
Posted By Christine
My move is to add the word 'sleep' vertically on...

My move is to add the word 'sleep' vertically on to the end of your word 'apple'.

Here's the letters: e p l a p e o r z s.
Forum: The Library 07-01-2013, 01:26 PM
Replies: 3,722
Views: 295,321
Posted By Christine
The Return of Sherlock Holmes.

The Return of Sherlock Holmes.
Forum: Fiction 06-24-2013, 02:13 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 958
Posted By Christine
I was really getting into this and was a bit...

I was really getting into this and was a bit disappointed when I came to the end.

Just two points: Stan found a trolley full of baked beans and canned food. I'd put the word 'other' before...
Forum: Free Writing 06-24-2013, 01:33 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 8,401
Posted By Christine
It's best to just write and get your beginning,...

It's best to just write and get your beginning, middle and end. Then you go over with the rewrites. But, of course, it depends what you're writing. Agatha Christie spent nine months planning.
Forum: Fiction 06-23-2013, 01:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 848
Posted By Christine
A nice little story but you'll have to do...

A nice little story but you'll have to do something about the 46-word sentence in the fifth paragraph.
Forum: Fiction 06-21-2013, 01:01 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,196
Posted By Christine
Sorry, I don't understand what's going on. Why...

Sorry, I don't understand what's going on. Why are Andrew and Joey standing on the conveyor belt? Why is everyone poked and prodded? What does Andrew see on the other side?

This short story...
Forum: Introductions 06-19-2013, 01:44 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 516
Posted By Christine
I thought it would probably be a chihuahua but I...

I thought it would probably be a chihuahua but I didn't know what else.
Forum: Introductions 06-18-2013, 02:11 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 516
Posted By Christine
Hello m11tenn, Welcome to the forum. I...

Hello m11tenn,

Welcome to the forum. I don't know what a chiweenie is.
Forum: Board Games 06-11-2013, 02:58 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,200
Posted By Christine
Icon13 Blind Snakes and Ladders

Stupid idea by me. :yawn:
Forum: Board Games 06-11-2013, 02:28 PM
Replies: 11,767
Views: 231,867
Posted By Christine
Someone's put Board Games Get it? "Board" games. ...

Someone's put Board Games Get it? "Board" games. I don't really get it. Should it be "Bored" games as in 'bored with writing'? Or are they highlighting the fact that these games on WritersBeat...
Forum: Introductions 06-10-2013, 01:20 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 575
Posted By Christine
Icon6 Hello

Hi Ruthie, welcome to the forum.

:D: A chocolate sun would melt itself.
Forum: Fiction 06-09-2013, 02:24 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 790
Posted By Christine
Elisa/win, the ending is meant to be sinister. ...

Elisa/win, the ending is meant to be sinister. The purpose is to frighten Jarvis because he's a negative character (he hates kids). But the ghosts aren't haunting him, they are only interested in...
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