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Forum: Poetry 06-06-2017, 10:46 PM
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Great poem. Good movement wonderful images....

Great poem. Good movement wonderful images. Evocative. I feel it as I'm taken through it. I would swap positions of the last two stanzas. I think it makes the ending much stronger. Great work!
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