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Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-12-2012, 07:10 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,086
Posted By Kazeshini
Shit, I miss that city! Ah well, I'll be back...

Shit, I miss that city! Ah well, I'll be back east with winter biting both sets of cheeks soon enough.

As for stress relief...
Running usually sates the beast and when it doesn't, shopping for...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-12-2012, 06:35 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,613
Posted By Kazeshini
"Human beings are the only creatures on Earth...

"Human beings are the only creatures on Earth that claim a god and the only living thing that behaves like it hasn't got one."
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-17-2012, 07:32 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,603
Posted By Kazeshini
Horses. I was an equestrian in another life. Been...

Horses. I was an equestrian in another life. Been getting the itch to get back into it recently but I'm afraid it will take over my life again and I'm kind of enjoying this whole writing thing. Maybe...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-17-2012, 06:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 725
Posted By Kazeshini
I used to do this too but as I got deeper into my...

I used to do this too but as I got deeper into my novel the plot veered off in a different direction and suddenly scenes that I had spent hours painstakingly editing became obsolete. I've learned to...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-17-2012, 06:31 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,484
Posted By Kazeshini
Richard Morgan is a noteworthy modern sci-fi...

Richard Morgan is a noteworthy modern sci-fi author that I recently discovered. Definitely worth a read especially if you are into noir.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-13-2012, 05:36 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 640
Posted By Kazeshini
A simple tip for dialogue is to say it out loud....

A simple tip for dialogue is to say it out loud. Sit inside your character's head and rant, cry, laugh etc. etc. until you can't distinguish their voice from yours. At some point you will know them...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-13-2012, 04:59 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 557
Posted By Kazeshini
Is the guard transporting the prisoner from one...

Is the guard transporting the prisoner from one prison to another? That could be a reason for traveling. Her escape could then be executed during the transport process.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-12-2012, 04:53 PM
Replies: 266
Views: 13,044
Posted By Kazeshini
Such a shame! I currently have Red Dead...

Such a shame! I currently have Red Dead Redemption, Way of the Samurai 3 and Soul Calibur 5 in rotation. Mass Effect and Skyrim are on my wish list, tee hee!
Forum: The Library 06-04-2012, 05:05 PM
Replies: 3,717
Views: 282,307
Posted By Kazeshini
Just finished Altered Carbon (amazing!) and am...

Just finished Altered Carbon (amazing!) and am starting Thirteen, another great sci-fi noir novel by the same author, Richard Morgan.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-30-2012, 04:51 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,480
Posted By Kazeshini
And "thunder only happens when it's raining"....

And "thunder only happens when it's raining". ;)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-14-2012, 08:03 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,846
Posted By Kazeshini
Woke up with a screaming hangover and my best...

Woke up with a screaming hangover and my best friend's brother-in-law in my bed...oh wait, it's his bed. Damn, damn, damn! I've got an 8:00 call, no time for awkward pleasantries. I pluck my clothes...
Forum: Tips & Advice 05-14-2012, 06:38 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 7,088
Posted By Kazeshini
It's funny that you brought up the build of...

It's funny that you brought up the build of suspense because I have been struggling with just that. As a writer suspense can at times feel bland. I already know how things are going to turn out and...
Forum: Tips & Advice 05-14-2012, 05:47 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 4,320
Posted By Kazeshini
Running helps me clear out the cobwebs too. When...

Running helps me clear out the cobwebs too. When I'm out on a run I listen to music, mostly trance and house. The scenes I come up with while I'm running sans notebook become linked to whatever song...
Forum: The Library 05-14-2012, 05:13 PM
Replies: 3,717
Views: 282,307
Posted By Kazeshini
The first and fourth books are by far the best in...

The first and fourth books are by far the best in the series. Get through three if you can, book four is definitely worth it. And I agree, the climax of the series left me cold.
Forum: The Library 05-04-2012, 06:32 PM
Replies: 3,717
Views: 282,307
Posted By Kazeshini
Finally made it through the Dark Tower series and...

Finally made it through the Dark Tower series and am clearing my palette of that debacle with Altered Carbon by Richard Morgan.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-03-2012, 04:44 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 575
Posted By Kazeshini
Try writing it both ways, see which you like...

Try writing it both ways, see which you like better and go with that. Some people will say it's a waste of time writing a scene you aren't going to use but in my opinion writing from different...
Forum: Free Writing 04-20-2012, 09:07 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,258
Posted By Kazeshini
Seems like he would have noticed if Carol had...

Seems like he would have noticed if Carol had died while they were having sex. Maybe try an overdose instead. You could always write him as a killer, one with tendencies toward necrophilia.


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Forum: The Library 04-18-2012, 02:36 PM
Replies: 95
Views: 14,283
Posted By Kazeshini
Love Will Tear Us Apart by Joy Division ...

Love Will Tear Us Apart by Joy Division

When routine bites hard
And ambitions are low
And resentment rides high
But emotions won't grow
And we're changing our ways
Taking different roads.
...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-20-2012, 06:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 590
Posted By Kazeshini
LOL! Not to mention a handle of moonshine for...

LOL! Not to mention a handle of moonshine for every parched throat and a banjo on every knee.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-20-2012, 05:39 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 590
Posted By Kazeshini
If written thoughtfully you can propose...

If written thoughtfully you can propose intriguing alternative outcomes for society. For example: what would the US be like if the South had won the Civil War or what if JFK had never been...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-20-2012, 05:16 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,749
Posted By Kazeshini
I haven't come up with a title for my novel...

I haven't come up with a title for my novel either. A friend of mine proposed a few silly ones that had nothing to do with anything but we were just drinking and goofing off. I figure a title is the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-15-2012, 05:02 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,095
Posted By Kazeshini
Have them for dessert :) ...

Have them for dessert :)

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Forum: Fiction 03-13-2012, 01:35 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,281
Posted By Kazeshini
Very nicely done. Leaving the thing undefined...

Very nicely done. Leaving the thing undefined makes the story that much more relatable becusae it lets the reader fill in the blank. For me it was eerily close to a conversation I had with a friend...
Forum: Fiction 03-12-2012, 03:56 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 732
Posted By Kazeshini
Really enjoyed this, it was very entertaining....

Really enjoyed this, it was very entertaining. You should do another where Cthulhu and Nyarlathotep kick back and reminisce about the good old days when human sacrifices were made in their name and...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-12-2012, 10:45 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,026
Posted By Kazeshini
My mistake, for some reason I thought you were...

My mistake, for some reason I thought you were from the states. There's such an eclectic group on here it's hard keeping track, lol!
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