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Forum: Fiction 03-06-2018, 12:15 PM
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Posted By spshane
I concur with Rincewind. Your first paragraph is...

I concur with Rincewind. Your first paragraph is too purple and overly myopic. If you're not familiar with the term "purple" or purple prose, Bing it.

I'm not one who's big on "writing rules" but...
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