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Forum: Fiction Today, 05:28 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 133
Posted By Nick Pierce
Sorry, the question was how do I feel about...

Sorry, the question was how do I feel about Kaylee.

I do think her name is overused.

Aw, that still ain't answerin' direct.

Sorry.
Maybe bein' over 30 years (twice) handicaps my ability to...
Forum: Fiction Today, 05:22 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 133
Posted By Nick Pierce
The piece comes across with the value of a Swiss...

The piece comes across with the value of a Swiss Army Knife.

Lot of stuff here but no dominant function.
Forum: Free Writing Today, 05:09 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 99
Posted By Nick Pierce
" ... not much older than myself." gotta...

" ... not much older than myself."

gotta stop here for now

this is so much more controlled than your usual style

works for me
Forum: Non-Fiction Today, 04:58 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 30
Posted By Nick Pierce
green dragon zen center renegade

Walkin' through the
fir tree forest on
a Mt. Tamalpais
mountain side

Followin' a grown over
game trail through the
underbrush

It's 9:30 am on
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-17-2018, 05:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 97
Posted By Nick Pierce
So do you know of Ur?

So do you know of Ur?
Forum: Free Writing 02-17-2018, 05:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 256
Posted By Nick Pierce
Line six establishes a 3d footing by giving an...

Line six establishes a 3d footing by giving an earth location and line seven puts a time to the bit.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-17-2018, 05:14 AM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
[QUOTE=Gaines;741965] Om, I see.

[QUOTE=Gaines;741965]


Om, I see.
Forum: Free Writing 02-17-2018, 12:37 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 256
Posted By Nick Pierce
Line 5 steps through the fourth wall with the...

Line 5 steps through the fourth wall with the vision/color device.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-17-2018, 12:33 AM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
Prate & Preach?

Prate & Preach?
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-17-2018, 12:31 AM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
Please, sir, your words ... tears, weeping ......

Please, sir, your words ... tears, weeping ... sniffles .... may I use the hem of your robe?
Forum: Free Writing 02-17-2018, 12:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 99
Posted By Nick Pierce
Finished the first paragraph. I am stunned. ...

Finished the first paragraph.
I am stunned.

I must enjoy/digest this work piecemeal.

Thanks for posting it.
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-17-2018, 12:23 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 97
Posted By Nick Pierce
I'm writing because

I want to. I have to. I must.

Not so I'm regarded as "A Writer".
Not because I have something important to say.

Because this pencil movin' across this paper soothes me.

The "civilizations"...
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-16-2018, 11:51 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
Hey, hold up - are you havin' me on?

Hey, hold up - are you havin' me on?
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-16-2018, 11:50 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
I dunno.

I dunno.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-16-2018, 11:49 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
Hey, that's really good. That guy should...

Hey, that's really good.

That guy should write.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-16-2018, 05:24 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
I say Bitch & Moan is supported by this post,...

I say Bitch & Moan is supported by this post, albeit inadvertently.
Forum: Free Writing 02-16-2018, 04:42 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 256
Posted By Nick Pierce
Screw movin' it. Gonna mess with it here unless...

Screw movin' it.
Gonna mess with it here unless I am advised that some (unknown to me at this time) rules are being ... ahem ... violated.
Forum: Free Writing 02-16-2018, 04:39 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 256
Posted By Nick Pierce
First two lines engage sight Next line brings...

First two lines engage sight
Next line brings motion which is carried into the one after it and sight is re-engaged via color reference.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-16-2018, 04:08 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 173
Posted By Nick Pierce
Never stops.

Never stops.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-16-2018, 01:16 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 844
Posted By Nick Pierce
Bitch & Moan

Bitch & Moan
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-16-2018, 01:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 173
Posted By Nick Pierce
Motto? Wrong guy.

Motto?

Wrong guy.
Forum: Fiction 02-16-2018, 03:03 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 388
Posted By Nick Pierce
A grouper is a fish. A gaff is a pole with a...

A grouper is a fish.
A gaff is a pole with a curved and pointed metal piece attached to one end.

Put 'em together and VOILA!
A gaffed grouper.
Forum: Free Writing 02-16-2018, 02:57 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 256
Posted By Nick Pierce
You get it. I'm gonna move it to the poetry...

You get it.

I'm gonna move it to the poetry page and dissect it to show what you (and I) see in the piece.


But first I gotta go do my job.
Ah, what the hell - that's where I wrote this ditty...
Forum: Free Writing 02-15-2018, 03:10 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 256
Posted By Nick Pierce
Delicate field for data research.

Delicate field for data research.
Forum: Lyrics 02-15-2018, 03:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 176
Posted By Nick Pierce
Could you give us an idea about your process from...

Could you give us an idea about your process from inspiration to composition?
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