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Forum: Fiction 09-14-2016, 05:51 PM
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Views: 548
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The Farewell Speech (Part 2 of 2)

Earth’s orbit
April 18th
10:00AM

After departing from its commissioning ceremony at Area 51 in Nevada, the Hades emerged from the atmosphere with eight fighters from the two squadrons that...
Forum: Fiction 09-14-2016, 04:04 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,268
Posted By Writingfan27
Wow, heavy story. It felt like everything was...

Wow, heavy story. It felt like everything was falling apart around the main character.
Forum: Fiction 09-13-2016, 08:20 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,206
Posted By Writingfan27
The Farewell Speech (Part 1 of 2)

Plot. Admiral Garff delivers an outgoing speech to his crew before moving on to his next assignment.

USS Hydra
Pioneer Base, docking station one
Earth’s orbit
April 12th, 2104
2:00PM

All...
Forum: Fiction 07-09-2016, 09:36 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,995
Posted By Writingfan27
This is a very good story. But you could've...

This is a very good story.

But you could've posted the additional chapters as updates instead of putting them in the comment section.
Forum: Fiction 11-07-2015, 05:20 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,042
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Final Chapter)

Somewhere in deep space

A massive hyperspace window opened and the Borgan superweapon platform referred to by its creators as the ultra-bombarder emerged.

After completing a quick but through...
Forum: Fiction 11-05-2015, 02:41 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 497
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 10 part 2)

Four hours later

Vandal 2 along with the F-33s and Robin shuttles dropped out of hyperspace two miles from the LeMay and were greeted by Colonel Chandler over the radio.

“Welcome back guys, I...
Forum: Fiction 11-03-2015, 04:12 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 423
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 10 part 1)

LeMay ops center
One hour later

“General Savage, we have a secure channel established with AFSPACECOM and the White House,” Colonel McDowell said.

“Savage ordered him to put them on screen...
Forum: Fiction 11-01-2015, 07:27 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 430
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 9 Part 4)

Observation point 2
Nine minutes later

"Captain, another dome on the roof is opening,” Sergeant Grills shouted.

“They’re going launch another superweapon platform,” Hera said in disbelief....
Forum: Fiction 11-01-2015, 07:09 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 470
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 9 part 3)

BCP-452 orbit
A few seconds after the Electronic attack.

“Timberwolf 1 to Timberwolf 9, we’ve just arrived over the planet. What’s the status of the electronic attack on the facility?” Colonel...
Forum: Fiction 10-29-2015, 08:45 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 412
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 9 Part 2)

Observation Point 2

The silence was instantly shattered by the sound of extremely loud sirens going off at the superweapon production facility and Captain Sanderson instantly sprung up from the...
Forum: Fiction 10-24-2015, 06:45 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 352
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 9 part 1)

Vandal 2
Hyperspace

“Get a load of this Fitz, our current speed is well over sixty-thousand miles per hour,” Rick said.

“Sixty-thousand miles per hour and the rest of the strike force is...
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2015, 07:39 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 442
Posted By Writingfan27
Wow, a confession quickly followed by a suicide....

Wow, a confession quickly followed by a suicide. Talk about intense.
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2015, 05:02 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,783
Posted By Writingfan27
Excellent start, I strongly encourage you to...

Excellent start, I strongly encourage you to pursue this story to the finish.
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2015, 12:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 739
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 8)

Two-hundred lightyears from SY ten-zero-five-three

The USAFV LeMay dropped out of hyperspace at high speed and its sensors detected nothing else in the area apart from itself.

“Flight bridge...
Forum: Fiction 10-17-2015, 06:54 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 532
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 7 part 5)

Hangar bay one
A few minutes later

Rick and the other pilots were gathered around Ramsey and Stoll in the middle of the launchway going over one last detail about the mission as the ordnance...
Forum: Fiction 10-16-2015, 10:50 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 452
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sorite (Chapter 7 part 4)

Vandal and Mallet flights
Hyperspace


"Only a few more hours of this, and we’ll be back on the LeMay for some R&R,” Lieutenant Fitzgerald commented.

“Some being the keyword of course, it...
Forum: Fiction 10-10-2015, 06:51 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 449
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 7 part 3)

USAFV LeMay
General Savage’s quarters

General Savage was resting comfortably in his bed and the only noise in the room was a faint humming sound from an overhead vent.

He had been asleep for...
Forum: Fiction 10-09-2015, 05:25 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,574
Posted By Writingfan27
We all know that in real life things would be...

We all know that in real life things would be going quite differently, but I think this would make a perfect children's story given the friendly setting.

Nice work, keep writing.
Forum: Fiction 10-08-2015, 06:44 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,643
Posted By Writingfan27
Very good.

Very good.
Forum: Fiction 10-07-2015, 06:57 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 480
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 7 part 2)

White House Situation Room
Shortly after the defeat of the Tulanian ships

As real-time sensor feed from the Reno faded from the main screen following the ships withdraw, Admiral Myers hung up...
Forum: Fiction 10-03-2015, 08:34 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 544
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 7 part 1)

BCP-452
The next morning

The Delta team and Tulanian scouts emerged from the cave with their weapons drawn and ready to confront any troublemakers.

Once they were sure they were in the...
Forum: Fiction 10-03-2015, 03:43 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,300
Posted By Writingfan27
Wow, not your typical journalist assignment but...

Wow, not your typical journalist assignment but this was a great story nonetheless.
Forum: Fiction 10-01-2015, 07:56 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 542
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sortie (Chapter 6 part 3)

P1113
Five minutes later.

The bomber formations emerged from hyperspace at multiple points around the planet and dropped down just below the upper atmosphere to begin their runs.

“Sir, BDA...
Forum: Fiction 09-24-2015, 05:43 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 758
Posted By Writingfan27
This story is pretty solid in terms of the plot,...

This story is pretty solid in terms of the plot, but adding in some dialogue would make it feel more like a story.
Forum: Fiction 09-22-2015, 07:46 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 454
Posted By Writingfan27
Rick's Sorite (Chapter 6 part 2)

BCP-452

Jerak, the commander of the facility tasked with building the new superweapons for the Borgan Empire stood at the entrance with nine-hundred warriors assembled behind him.

He wasn’t...
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