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Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 01:20 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 638
Posted By redrobin62
Don't be afraid to use quotation marks. They are...

Don't be afraid to use quotation marks. They are your friends.
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 01:16 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,331
Posted By redrobin62
I see you've expanded the story. So far, so good.

I see you've expanded the story. So far, so good.
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 01:02 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 578
Posted By redrobin62
Well, there was certainly a lot of anger...

Well, there was certainly a lot of anger expressed in this short anecdote. I can relate, though. Medical costs are off the hook and it seems like everyone's feeling it these days.
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 12:58 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 631
Posted By redrobin62
I liked this story. It presented a very clear...

I liked this story. It presented a very clear plot - man vs himself. You don't see those too often.
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 12:54 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 661
Posted By redrobin62
I guess its poetic structure was as interesting...

I guess its poetic structure was as interesting as its 2nd person point of view.
Forum: Previous Contests 10-22-2012, 12:48 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 10,091
Posted By redrobin62
Jatindranath Singh and his little brother,...

Jatindranath Singh and his little brother, Dinesh, went down to a tributary of the Ganges River early one morning with a sack full of clothes to wash. Their mother, Baljeet, was sick with the flu and...
Forum: Fiction 09-12-2012, 03:52 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 520
Posted By redrobin62
It's interesting. Here in America you stay in...

It's interesting. Here in America you stay in your car pretty much for the duration of the emission inspection. The operator asks you to rev on the engine while your wheels spin a metal roller. You...
Forum: Fiction 09-11-2012, 08:58 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 659
Posted By redrobin62
It'll be interesting to read the rest of this...

It'll be interesting to read the rest of this story. I noticed two typos.
1. "...it was a place were nothing lived." It should be 'where'.
2."I must be loosing my mind." It's 'losing'.
...
Forum: Fiction 09-11-2012, 01:10 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 638
Posted By redrobin62
Past tense vs present tense - always a struggle....

Past tense vs present tense - always a struggle. I've written six screenplays, and since all scripts are written in the present tense, transitioning to past tense for short story or novel fiction has...
Forum: Board Games 09-09-2012, 10:51 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,928
Posted By redrobin62
Paranoid from using LSD, the math professor,...

Paranoid from using LSD, the math professor, quaking in his boots, ignored his lunch of lasagna while hiding in an igloo.

bowl, typewriter, bitter, coffin, witch
Forum: Board Games 09-09-2012, 10:44 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 4,499
Posted By redrobin62
legitimate

legitimate
Forum: Board Games 09-09-2012, 10:43 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,627
Posted By redrobin62
The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch,...

The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

"Mediocrities of the world, I am your Patron Saint, and I absolve you!"
Forum: Board Games 09-09-2012, 10:38 PM
Replies: 331
Views: 9,809
Posted By redrobin62
Song Contest

Song Contest
Forum: Board Games 09-09-2012, 10:37 PM
Replies: 13,574
Views: 223,305
Posted By redrobin62
6

6
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-09-2012, 10:33 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 4,355
Posted By redrobin62
Given my history of depression, I write to occupy...

Given my history of depression, I write to occupy my time, to keep me from jumping off a bridge or lying down on active train tracks. It'd be lovely if more of my short stories got published, I won't...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-09-2012, 10:15 PM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 215,454
Posted By redrobin62
I'm from Trinidad & Tobago. I'm mixed black &...

I'm from Trinidad & Tobago. I'm mixed black & Chinese. I'm an author and a musician. I've played in bands, engineered in studios, and released a few albums. I also have Asperger's Syndrome. This...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-09-2012, 10:11 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,750
Posted By redrobin62
After writing five novellas this summer, I'm...

After writing five novellas this summer, I'm ready to take the novel plunge. The longest novella I wrote, Stranded In Paradise, clocked in at 31K words. I'd like to make the novel around 50K. I don't...
Forum: Fiction 09-09-2012, 06:45 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,162
Posted By redrobin62
Good story. I liked it. One for the Facebook...

Good story. I liked it. One for the Facebook generation.
Forum: Fiction 09-09-2012, 06:34 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 574
Posted By redrobin62
Thanks for the replies, youse guys. William S.'s...

Thanks for the replies, youse guys. William S.'s comment had be thinking - what is fiction and what is non-fiction? Where does it begin and end? Did this event happen? As a matter of fact, it did. It...
Forum: Fiction 09-09-2012, 12:24 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 574
Posted By redrobin62
The Trees - Flash 820 words

I was going to get on my knees here and beg you guys to please me gentle with me as I'm new. Then again, I won't learn that way, right?

The Trees

I received the message around 6:30 pm....
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 09-08-2012, 11:52 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,015
Posted By redrobin62
The three Death Race films were "televised."...

The three Death Race films were "televised." There's another film I saw years ago where hunters hunted an unfortunate group of people in a rigged jungle and it was "televised." I like the maze idea....
Forum: Fiction 09-06-2012, 04:14 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,190
Posted By redrobin62
I liked it. It's interesting. The quotation marks...

I liked it. It's interesting. The quotation marks used here are single, not double. In Europe, this is the accepted practice, right?
Forum: Previous Contests 09-06-2012, 03:25 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 7,118
Posted By redrobin62
Message in a Bottle Online dating sites...

Message in a Bottle

Online dating sites infuriated Tyrance. He tried his best to believe the posters, but after encountering a few less that desirable dates, he was inclined to think nearly...
Forum: Fiction 09-05-2012, 01:14 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,697
Posted By redrobin62
Okay. I give up. What is Rule Number One?

Okay. I give up. What is Rule Number One?
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2012, 11:56 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 857
Posted By redrobin62
This was a little hard to get through because of...

This was a little hard to get through because of the grammatical errors, tense changes, etc. Hopefully as you grow as a reader and writer, some of the standard rules of grammar will sink in. Good...
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