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Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 12:14 PM
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Posted By kev
waiting for the time when our dead languages ...

waiting for the time
when our dead languages
transform once more
into living tongues.

Like these lines Leila. Pity you erased the original to compare.
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 12:00 PM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
My pleasure Leila, chuffed you enjoyed.

My pleasure Leila, chuffed you enjoyed.
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 11:58 AM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
Quotes working again Yo!!! Thanks for the...

Quotes working again Yo!!!

Thanks for the explanation Luciaphile.
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 11:53 AM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
Quote from brian . . . (I’m not...

Quote from brian . . . (I’m not good with the technicalities of poetry. I sort of just like what I like.

I like this. You have a way of creating a simple but wide feeling here.
...
Forum: Poetry Yesterday, 11:24 AM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
Thanks for your response eripiomundus. Although...

Thanks for your response eripiomundus. Although it wasn't necessary to explain, glad you did as it gives a fuller picture of who you are - always helpful in a virtual world. I'm glad you enjoyed the...
Forum: Poetry 11-22-2017, 09:05 AM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
Thanks Myers, appreciated.

Thanks Myers, appreciated.
Forum: Poetry 11-22-2017, 09:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 96
Posted By kev
I can't seem to hear the song in my head. I can't...

I can't seem to hear the song in my head. I can't get the rhythm going. Maybe Myers could do something musical with it if it interests him, but I think he's got a lot on. I can only point you to...
Forum: Poetry 11-22-2017, 08:42 AM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
Spot on. Well seen. You're another one I had to...

Spot on. Well seen. You're another one I had to google, but got no definition of meaning. Thanks for your imput, appreciated.
Forum: Poetry 11-22-2017, 08:36 AM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
An interesting perspective eripiomundus ( had to...

An interesting perspective eripiomundus ( had to google your avi name, but I'm still no wiser. You may well be right about the length of the poem, but I try to condense what I want to say so that...
Forum: Poetry 11-20-2017, 02:09 PM
Replies: 14
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Views: 197
Posted By kev
Boy

There is much more beyond the garden wall,
the fenced in field, the boundary lane,
So much more beyond the village wood,
the rolling hills, the grey town hall;
and though these city streets the...
Forum: Poetry 10-24-2017, 01:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 526
Posted By kev
Thanks for the response Megan.

Thanks for the response Megan.
Forum: Introductions 10-11-2017, 02:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 261
Posted By kev
whereupon the goblin looked down at his hands,...

whereupon the goblin looked down at his hands, shrugged and then asked "...if an actor doesn't believe in his part while playing it, do you think the onlooker will believe in him any more than he...
Forum: Poetry 10-04-2017, 10:27 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 526
Posted By kev
Thanks chat....Though it's finished and won't be...

Thanks chat....Though it's finished and won't be altered, but thanks for responding.
Forum: Poetry 10-02-2017, 03:44 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,548
Posted By kev
Thanks for the first take Myers. You've got the...

Thanks for the first take Myers. You've got the slinky sort of sensual sound. - a base to work from- , Maybe that sort of horn sound could be swapped for a deeper sax if you gave it it room by...
Forum: Poetry 10-02-2017, 02:38 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 526
Posted By kev
:eek:

:eek:
Forum: Poetry 10-01-2017, 09:53 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 526
Posted By kev
At times it takes awhile for something to sink in...

At times it takes awhile for something to sink in and accept that it sits better than what I had. Thanks Grace.
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2017, 10:57 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,548
Posted By kev
I like your style Myers. No idea what a major or...

I like your style Myers. No idea what a major or minor is unless I hear it. Can't play any instrument for the life of me, but what I hear is the foot drum three or four times then guitar playing the...
Forum: Poetry 09-28-2017, 12:30 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,548
Posted By kev
Yes brian, a ballad type song but with something...

Yes brian, a ballad type song but with something more to equal the quality of words.
Forum: Poetry 09-27-2017, 02:59 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,548
Posted By kev
Love it Grace. Real feeling expressed that I...

Love it Grace. Real feeling expressed that I relate to. ....Got the rhythm but don't hear the music that was going off in your head.
Do you play a keyboard, guitar?
Forum: Poetry 09-27-2017, 09:10 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 526
Posted By kev
Armstrong

I cannot remember, I do not recall
Climbing the air unbalanced
to stand wavering on the brink of a step,
anchoring to the earth in a moments pause
before the prod of discovery urged my first...
Forum: Poetry 09-19-2017, 11:37 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 703
Posted By kev
Nail on the head Grace. The last verse is the one...

Nail on the head Grace. The last verse is the one that's quietly solid. I like the meaning and have felt similar to what the poem expresses in my years travelling from country to country, yet rarely...
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2017, 02:40 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 989
Posted By kev
it feels like a disconnected...

it feels like a disconnected distance........Perhaps that was what the old guy was feeling? Can't change the structure or meaning of it Drew. It comes out in what form it arrives at. It made sense.
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2017, 02:15 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 989
Posted By kev
Guess we're on the same page Grace.

Guess we're on the same page Grace.
Forum: Poetry 09-06-2017, 11:38 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 989
Posted By kev
I don't know the technicalities of it Myers.. I...

I don't know the technicalities of it Myers.. I tend to look at Ted Hughes Jaguar or Wind as the pinnacle of prose poetry. It's not so much a knowing but more of feeling what it is for me
Forum: Poetry 09-06-2017, 11:14 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 989
Posted By kev
I was on my bike and saw the old man for a second...

I was on my bike and saw the old man for a second or two--lonely, abandoned, as so many are when nudged into an old folks home because family don't want to look after them. It's they who lack the...
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