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Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 05:15 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 948
Posted By brianpatrick
We all could learn something from the ants. ...

We all could learn something from the ants.


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Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 01:43 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 948
Posted By brianpatrick
The Trick to Shut Up Boring People Who Talk Too Much

https://youtu.be/D7vB8lnVTiE

The little laugh is priceless.


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Forum: Fiction 11-23-2017, 09:25 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 143
Posted By brianpatrick
Number 2 reads smooth. Number 1 is distracting. I...

Number 2 reads smooth. Number 1 is distracting. I mean, for those of us who know the rules.


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Forum: Fiction 11-23-2017, 09:15 PM
Replies: 154
Views: 12,964
Posted By brianpatrick
If you get lazy Iíll be one of the first to say...

If you get lazy Iíll be one of the first to say so.😀😀😀


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Forum: Fiction 11-23-2017, 05:01 PM
Replies: 154
Views: 12,964
Posted By brianpatrick
You are probably the best unknown writer Iíve...

You are probably the best unknown writer Iíve ever come across. The only one (so far) Iíd let get away with the shit you do grammatically, without some fuss. Youíre so far in that Iím at a loss to...
Forum: Fiction 11-23-2017, 04:55 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 143
Posted By brianpatrick
I think this is a good start, with interesting...

I think this is a good start, with interesting confusion and a few sweet base hits. ďAmar was never angry, was never anything.Ē is a good description (i would comma there instead of period).

You...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-23-2017, 11:34 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 686
Posted By brianpatrick
Might be premature to say itís gone forever....

Might be premature to say itís gone forever. There seems to me a wave coming.

Trump with his ďfake newsĒ declarations is even adding to the swell, but maybe or maybe not in the way he intends....
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-23-2017, 10:45 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 686
Posted By brianpatrick
Yeah, no way to know for sure. But I think...

Yeah, no way to know for sure. But I think without the huge backlash it would have just been a guy doing what he felt was right to do. The shit-storm just gave his actions more power, and solidified...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-23-2017, 10:12 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 686
Posted By brianpatrick
It feels like a lot of people pigeon-hole...

It feels like a lot of people pigeon-hole polarizing topics rather than looking at the whole picture. This really cripples both sidesí arguments.

People in general arenít the driven narrative...
Forum: Poetry 11-23-2017, 10:04 AM
Replies: 14
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Posted By brianpatrick
Iím not good with the technicalities of poetry. I...

Iím not good with the technicalities of poetry. I sort of just like what I like.

I like this. You have a way of creating a simple but wide feeling here.

The only place I tripped a little was...
Forum: Free Writing 11-23-2017, 09:08 AM
Replies: 99
Views: 9,169
Posted By brianpatrick
You not believe Logos has schizophrenia? Hmm... I...

You not believe Logos has schizophrenia? Hmm... I had no reason to doubt what he says about it, especially given the content of the OP and air around responses given.

I pretty much take Logos at...
Forum: Non-Fiction 11-22-2017, 06:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 81
Posted By brianpatrick
Donít know where to file this bit of writing. Not...

Donít know where to file this bit of writing. Not a story really, maybe flash, or just some thinking out loud.

My son also has a superpower disguised as a disability. That part was touching.

...
Forum: Free Writing 11-22-2017, 06:02 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 9,169
Posted By brianpatrick
Fantastic story! Schizophrenic, yeah, WTF?!...

Fantastic story!

Schizophrenic, yeah, WTF?!

The proverbs are mostly true, like you said. But, so what? Most are obvious. A few are not true, and a few more are kooky and indecipherable (my...
Forum: Free Writing 11-19-2017, 08:11 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 948
Posted By brianpatrick
Iím not sure Iíve ever met a boring person. I...

Iím not sure Iíve ever met a boring person. I know people who tell the same stories over and over again. When this happens Iím fascinated by what makes them do so. Drunk people aside (itís obvious...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-19-2017, 03:55 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 231
Posted By brianpatrick
Itís in the details. Complex and complicated...

Itís in the details. Complex and complicated characters interacting in unpredictable ways. Good guys who are not all good, bad guys who are not all bad, people in love who question their...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-19-2017, 11:00 AM
Replies: 96
Views: 2,346
Posted By brianpatrick
Every state is already short on plumbers and...

Every state is already short on plumbers and trades people. A few less would raise the prices I can charge even higher.

Hmm. You canít quote me, and I canít read anybodyís stories (except the...
Forum: Introductions 11-17-2017, 08:39 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 174
Posted By brianpatrick
Fuck off is my favorite subject. Once...

Fuck off is my favorite subject.

Once reality became Ďsubjectiveí and all could choose which they preferred to live in, interactions with others became boring.

Fuck off is pretty much all...
Forum: Introductions 11-17-2017, 08:12 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 174
Posted By brianpatrick
A+ness... I like that. Can I steal it? ...

A+ness... I like that. Can I steal it?


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Forum: Introductions 11-17-2017, 08:08 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 174
Posted By brianpatrick
I did once you said you spoke the Queens English....

I did once you said you spoke the Queens English. Hence, the tribute.


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Forum: Introductions 11-17-2017, 07:54 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 174
Posted By brianpatrick
https://youtu.be/02D2T3wGCYg Sent from my...

https://youtu.be/02D2T3wGCYg


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Forum: Introductions 11-17-2017, 07:35 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 174
Posted By brianpatrick
Iíd like to read the story you posted, as well as...

Iíd like to read the story you posted, as well as catch up on The Mere Tide, but Tapatalk is not working with the forum right now. Iím only getting the last couple paragraphs of stories posted by...
Forum: Introductions 11-17-2017, 07:32 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 174
Posted By brianpatrick
You misspelled apologize. Sorry. Sent...

You misspelled apologize. Sorry.


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Forum: Writers' Cafe 11-15-2017, 08:45 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 5,727
Posted By brianpatrick
https://youtu.be/Uw0rzonn8qA Sent from my...

https://youtu.be/Uw0rzonn8qA


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Forum: Writers' Cafe 11-15-2017, 08:40 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 5,727
Posted By brianpatrick
I listened to this. Itís pretty good. Have you...

I listened to this. Itís pretty good. Have you heard Mark Hollisís some album from 1998?

Heís the master of this genre. Or, the creator.


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Forum: Non-Fiction 11-15-2017, 08:30 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 656
Posted By brianpatrick
Agree. This is a fascinating story. I mean, Iím a...

Agree. This is a fascinating story. I mean, Iím a 50 year old hetro with no real connection to the trans or gay community and I find myself reading this and thinking: WTF?! Itís like watching an...
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