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Forum: Fiction 10-15-2018, 09:01 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Shiftless summer. Stirring in the long right...

Shiftless summer. Stirring in the long right dawns of the season. The bead lifted on its seat of mercury deep into the red. Steambathing with the pilot in the last of the floodwater. Oaring by...
Forum: Fiction 10-14-2018, 10:09 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 392
Posted By bluewpc
But more to the point and the question raised by...

But more to the point and the question raised by the title. Is whats depicted progress? Considering the tone of the short it seems that infrastructural advance needs to be performed by internal...
Forum: Fiction 10-14-2018, 08:53 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 392
Posted By bluewpc
No I dont think thats true. Most of his work had...

No I dont think thats true. Most of his work had a tinge of sentimentality. Not to say I dont love his work. But East of Eden cast a gentle eye so to speak on Adam Trask, even if it spared him...
Forum: Fiction 10-14-2018, 08:37 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 392
Posted By bluewpc
@IanG true but keeping calm and balanced is a...

@IanG true but keeping calm and balanced is a necessary discipline in any trade whether it be engineering or marksmanship or marketing.

This might be my own approach but Ive always preferred the...
Forum: Fiction 10-13-2018, 09:18 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 392
Posted By bluewpc
I thought this was pretty heavy handed and that...

I thought this was pretty heavy handed and that most of what you forefronted would be more suitable in the background. That doesnt mean that obviousness is bad necessarily but that here this...
Forum: Fiction 10-08-2018, 08:42 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
The afternoon faded into a vesperal azure...

The afternoon faded into a vesperal azure braceleted by cirrus and the grounds became altogether haunted by the out melt of shadows from the soil between the glassy tinsel like demons leaning from...
Forum: Fiction 10-02-2018, 09:41 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
So it has come to pass. A little while past...

So it has come to pass. A little while past someone asked if I ever get emotional over characters and I think I have to overturn my answer. I spent the last three days barely writing because I...
Forum: Fiction 10-01-2018, 06:30 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Glad ya like my crap :) And my god you dont...

Glad ya like my crap :)

And my god you dont know Sandlot? I shake my cane at thee young whippersnapper. Also diamond is the pitcher's mound, known as the diamond which is the pitcher's mound,...
Forum: Fiction 09-27-2018, 09:41 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 498
Posted By bluewpc
Hey Elenita I quite enjoyed this. Youve a...

Hey Elenita I quite enjoyed this. Youve a wondrous dexterity when describing movements of the body that I adore and a subtle eye for detailing. A conciseness Im a tad jealous of :D

The question...
Forum: Fiction 09-24-2018, 10:50 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
And here comes the switch The Mere Tide isnt...

And here comes the switch The Mere Tide isnt really about metaphysical truths or war or the nature of evil but the everlasting past time of baseball. Ah a gorier Sandlot and with necrophiliacs to...
Forum: Fiction 09-20-2018, 11:46 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
And so it typed to the final period, me short...

And so it typed to the final period, me short story. Ill take a break from it for the next two three weeks and then spend a month or so editing. Once done it aught be available barring any outbreaks...
Forum: Fiction 09-18-2018, 10:35 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
New peoples have arrived what is their deal? Who...

New peoples have arrived what is their deal? Who is this mysterious masticator of our hero's braided mane?




The turnoff was hardly a mile distant. The pilot wheeled port and soon they were...
Forum: Fiction 09-13-2018, 10:09 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Hey guys and gals so good news and good news. The...

Hey guys and gals so good news and good news. The short story Ive been working on is nearing its end and after a month-month or so to edit should be available around I suppose the late of November. I...
Forum: Fiction 09-08-2018, 07:36 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
A sad silted drizzle tintypegrayed the windshield...

A sad silted drizzle tintypegrayed the windshield and the steady brooming of the wipers brought into clarity again a grayer morn and the forward traffic and a moon like a scoria coin. Futile...
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2018, 08:48 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
A man needs his sleep. So how turns the worm chin...

A man needs his sleep. So how turns the worm chin what's up with you?

Hahaha i had my friend take the picture immediately cause i thought it would look badass. Blue is not above vanity :D
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2018, 08:46 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Say whaaa you dont think its a good photo?

Say whaaa you dont think its a good photo?
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2018, 08:42 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Which do you prefer? Rhyme or prose?

Which do you prefer? Rhyme or prose?
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2018, 08:31 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
@chin hahahaha aye youre right ive a gut of the...

@chin hahahaha aye youre right ive a gut of the beer but every man aught have a vice. Otherwise good poem, has a nice rhyme scheme :)
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2018, 08:10 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Heh Ive backed up TFA and MT to secrets they...

Heh Ive backed up TFA and MT to secrets they lord. I actually have the uncut manuscript of TFA, the one that topped out at 1k+ pages hidden on the moon.

I really wish we could store information...
Forum: Fiction 09-02-2018, 08:20 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Hohoho I still remember whats his name waiting...

Hohoho I still remember whats his name waiting for his dealer to show up. That was a trip. Tell you the truth sometimes I get the feeling IJ was unintentionally a really long anti-drug pamphlet.
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Forum: Fiction 09-02-2018, 04:31 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
I'll have to check him out then. Ive heard things...

I'll have to check him out then. Ive heard things mostly the same things Id heard about Wallace and truth be told I never got through Infinite Jest
Forum: Fiction 09-02-2018, 03:46 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
@dazere You know I never read pynchon ...

@dazere You know I never read pynchon


Some hours later a riuk opened the closet door and gave a cursory lookabout at the custodial clutter of cleaning supplies and metal shelving and washsink...
Forum: Fiction 08-27-2018, 08:46 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
@chinspinner Haha tis bien Spinner wordiness is a...

@chinspinner Haha tis bien Spinner wordiness is a sin Im consistently guilty of. I also forgo quotation marks though whether thats a sin I know not. Other grammatical anomalies I simply indulge in, I...
Forum: Fiction 08-21-2018, 06:04 PM
Replies: 254
Views: 33,308
Posted By bluewpc
Ive been really slow with the updates mostly...

Ive been really slow with the updates mostly because I wanted to do some fine tuning that I never really got around to doing. As a note I started a second, much smaller project, set in the same...
Forum: Fiction 08-17-2018, 10:09 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 765
Posted By bluewpc
The night is quiet. Like a camp before battle....

The night is quiet. Like a camp before battle. The city beset by a thing unknown and will it come from forest or sea? The murengers have walled the pale, the gates are shut, but lo the thing's inside...
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