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Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-07-2015, 09:35 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 463
Posted By JMummey
This looks like so much fun, write a play!

Description: http://www.nycp.blogspot.com/2015/07/bad-theater-fest-accepting-submissions_2.html

Web site: http://www.badtheaterfest.com/home/

This definitely looks like fun:)
Forum: Poetry 06-05-2015, 08:05 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 585
Posted By JMummey
I really like this piece. It is quiet, beautiful...

I really like this piece. It is quiet, beautiful and pensive. I can see this vivid landscape unfolding in my mind, thank you!
Forum: Members' Feedback 06-03-2015, 08:20 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 11,611
Posted By JMummey
I like this idea:) Count me in! Definitely...

I like this idea:) Count me in! Definitely include the option for folks to pass it on to someone else if they don't want to do it (or it passes on by default after a certain time period)
Forum: Members' Feedback 06-03-2015, 08:13 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 4,984
Posted By JMummey
Literary magazine will not accept work posted to web sites (like this forum)

Just as an fyi in case some of you do not know this - I never really thought about it before now. Over the weekend I submitted a poem to a literary magazine in the hopes that they will eventually...
Forum: Fiction 05-26-2015, 06:16 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 4,084
Posted By JMummey
This story flows well and I was able to clearly...

This story flows well and I was able to clearly visualize the world you are describing. You are spot on with some of the mannerisms/qualities I see in our friends from China (no complaining, solid...
Forum: Fiction 05-26-2015, 05:37 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 787
Posted By JMummey
I love it. You summed up the horrid experience...

I love it. You summed up the horrid experience of being sick quite well, I wish it upon no one! I really like this, is so natural and gloomy: "make my peace with the universe knowing that it would...
Forum: Introductions 05-22-2015, 06:08 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 878
Posted By JMummey
Welcome! WOW! Alaska has to be the best place in...

Welcome! WOW! Alaska has to be the best place in the world to write, hope you are enjoying every second.
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 05-22-2015, 05:52 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 3,443
Posted By JMummey
Prompt #44 - The Year 3015 (part IV)

Chekka panics at the sight of her own blood and lets out a cry. A tear slides down her cheek as thoughts of impending doom overwhelm her. Catching a brief glimpse of something to her left, Chekka...
Forum: Poetry 05-22-2015, 05:31 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 562
Posted By JMummey
I love this! It is tight and hopeful, this is...

I love this! It is tight and hopeful, this is something I could read every Monday morning:)
Forum: Contest Central 05-22-2015, 05:25 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 3,973
Posted By JMummey
Congratulations Mr.Gryn - I enjoyed your poem...

Congratulations Mr.Gryn - I enjoyed your poem very much!
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 05-22-2015, 05:14 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 8,441
Posted By JMummey
I am so sorry! I am back, was taking care of my...

I am so sorry! I am back, was taking care of my mom but she is back to her old self so now I'm back in the game, I will post more of this story this weekend!!!
Forum: Poetry 03-03-2015, 04:35 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 732
Posted By JMummey
I love the positive tone of this poem, it made me...

I love the positive tone of this poem, it made me smile and I could see it painted on a wall in beautiful script above a piano, thanks for sharing this!
Forum: Fiction 03-03-2015, 04:31 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,552
Posted By JMummey
I agree, I was very surprised to learn MC was...

I agree, I was very surprised to learn MC was younger, I envisioned older and sleazy. I enjoyed the story for several reasons: I can visualize the characters, I like the hustle atmosphere, I like...
Forum: Free Writing 02-12-2015, 06:00 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,716
Posted By JMummey
I love this piece, I don't think the writing is...

I love this piece, I don't think the writing is as somber as the title because I feel hope for you toward the end of the piece when you mention you are at the beginning of your career. It reminded...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 02-10-2015, 12:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 8,441
Posted By JMummey
Prompt #44-The Year 3015 (part III)

Chekka remains very still while contemplating her next move. She knows navigating the forest will be easy tonight with the moons so bright. She looks at the forest. With a little remaining whiskey...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 02-09-2015, 12:57 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 4,618
Posted By JMummey
Thanks so much! I really enjoy writing, I'm so...

Thanks so much! I really enjoy writing, I'm so glad someone is enjoying it - you definitely started my Monday off well, thank you. I will write another installment this week!
Forum: Fiction 02-03-2015, 07:00 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,765
Posted By JMummey
I loved the story! It was a fast pace, full of...

I loved the story! It was a fast pace, full of emotion and had a surprise at the end, thanks for sharing this! There was only one thing that stood out for me, the word slump, it is used well but...
Forum: Fiction 02-03-2015, 06:46 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,718
Posted By JMummey
3/3/2015 – CHAPTER 3: PART 1 “Sugar bear,...

3/3/2015 – CHAPTER 3: PART 1

“Sugar bear, thanks for bringing me home. I know this is hard for you.” Sophie said with a smile as she hugged Roy. Roy blushed, kissed her forehead and, with a...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 02-03-2015, 06:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 4,618
Posted By JMummey
Prompt #44-The Year 3015 (part II)

Chekka spends the remaining hours of daylight reading a book called “Animal Farm” from her parent’s extensive library. By the time she reaches the part about a horse collapsing from hard labor, she...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 01-30-2015, 11:24 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 4,287
Posted By JMummey
Prompt #44-The Year 3015 (part I)

On her Bale, Chekka hovers inches above a calm river. A warm breeze tickles her cheek as she watches the sun rise over a quiet existence. The foul stench of rotting fish dissipated from this spot...
Forum: Fiction 01-15-2015, 06:46 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 3,682
Posted By JMummey
I would like to read more, keep going! The only...

I would like to read more, keep going! The only thing I felt was missing in this piece is a more elaborate description of what is seen in the photos.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-14-2015, 10:36 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,302
Posted By JMummey
My husband bought me a cheap little stand up desk...

My husband bought me a cheap little stand up desk at a garage sale, it looks like this but not as fancy:...
Forum: Fiction 01-04-2015, 07:00 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,718
Posted By JMummey
It was intentional, I was attempting to remove...

It was intentional, I was attempting to remove the lengthy descriptions based on prior feedback, I will go with a different approach in my next post, thanks!
Forum: Poetry 12-29-2014, 07:45 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 887
Posted By JMummey
This is beautiful, you capture the experience of...

This is beautiful, you capture the experience of nature so well and end with a logical and somber "that the Now will keep moving but one day I will not"
Forum: Fiction 12-29-2014, 07:34 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,718
Posted By JMummey
12/29/2014 - CHAPTER 2: PART 4 Radford,...

12/29/2014 - CHAPTER 2: PART 4

Radford, standing over a crumpled Gotti, wastes no more time.

"I thought we had an understanding."

"Man, what are you talking about?"

"A gold skull mood...
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