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Forum: Non-Fiction 02-14-2013, 07:14 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,062
Posted By LaughinJim
Hey pal, what does a mason do when he picks up a...

Hey pal, what does a mason do when he picks up a shitty brick like you. He pick's him up and drops him in the trash barrel, and the barrel don't have no brains any more. He's looking like a three...
Forum: Poetry 02-04-2013, 02:04 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 883
Posted By LaughinJim
Firehill, I was accusing you of not spelling...

Firehill, I was accusing you of not spelling focus wrong, but rather using a spelling that I find inferior for the reason previously stated. My spellos were typos but I had to throw a duck bone to...
Forum: Fiction 02-04-2013, 12:58 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 623
Posted By LaughinJim
Thanks MM, I'm glad the hook was comfy, and...

Thanks MM,

I'm glad the hook was comfy, and I really don't feel that sorry for the fish. Afterall, how many flies do you know with a big metal barb sticking out of their butts?

Still working...
Forum: Poetry 02-03-2013, 10:09 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 755
Posted By LaughinJim
GH, I hear you are finally out of bed and...

GH,

I hear you are finally out of bed and feeling a little better, thank God for that.

As you well know, the poem I referred to as beautiful was not this one but ‘Thinking of You’ which...
Forum: Poetry 02-03-2013, 07:10 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 755
Posted By LaughinJim
Sorry GH, but I am not T. S. Eliot and you and...

Sorry GH, but I am not T. S. Eliot and you and FireHill are most certainly not Ezra Pound. I am surprised that you would mention The Wasteland, as it has absolutely no similarities to my own style...
Forum: Poetry 02-03-2013, 02:49 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 434
Posted By LaughinJim
Note from Pedant's Corner Foreign words...

Note from Pedant's Corner

Foreign words should always be italicized, my dear; as in amorce.
Forum: Poetry 02-02-2013, 11:42 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 369
Posted By LaughinJim
Revenge of a Soul Sold into Slavery for Gold

Chained up to a writing desk
A Shakespeare tries his very best
To send out clues in written work
Of those guilty for his plight

The price of his bleak servitude
He will exact in rectitude...
Forum: Poetry 02-02-2013, 11:02 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 883
Posted By LaughinJim
FireHill said: ..."the poem seems more...

FireHill said:

..."the poem seems more focused on the painting, so it might have more impact if you stuck with that."

Geepers FH, it's a poem, the images of the artist at the sewing machine...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-02-2013, 05:38 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,829
Posted By LaughinJim
Dominic said: "The millennium is the...

Dominic said:

"The millennium is the thousand year rule of Jesus, which comes after God destroys the present system of things. The second coming. That has not happened yet. If what you say is not...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-02-2013, 04:24 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,829
Posted By LaughinJim
Only during the time of the Millenium, which is...

Only during the time of the Millenium, which is now, will all secrets be reavealed. Revelations, or the Apocalypse, (the word comes from the Greek for 'unveiling') tells about this time, our time....
Forum: Poetry 02-02-2013, 04:00 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 397
Posted By LaughinJim
Time for a Riddle

Wheels and wheels turn around
Everywhere my teeth are found
A pick-axe shape moves back and forth
In perfect rhythm shifts, of course
When do I finally lose a tooth
Only my face reveals the...
Forum: Poetry 02-02-2013, 01:39 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 755
Posted By LaughinJim
Thanks for the comments, Firehill, but like...

Thanks for the comments, Firehill, but like Aires' threats, the criticism contains much hot air. The riddle was like the one of the Sphinx, about the course of our lives. It is a warning to those who...
Forum: Poetry 02-02-2013, 01:30 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 704
Posted By LaughinJim
Like Beefheart, I really donít understand why you...

Like Beefheart, I really donít understand why you quoted someone elseís verse. It may indicate an insecurity with your own that you shouldnít have. Nice, tight poem, dark and intense; well done.
Forum: Poetry 02-02-2013, 01:06 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 883
Posted By LaughinJim
Hmm, Firehill, Working with your hands,...

Hmm, Firehill,

Working with your hands, doing highly skilled arts or crafts are quite related. I just don't know if I should have mentioned the color of the golden cloth that she cut to make the...
Forum: Fiction 02-02-2013, 01:00 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 623
Posted By LaughinJim
Hello MM, Happy Ground Hogís Day. I hear...

Hello MM,

Happy Ground Hogís Day. I hear that Punxsutauney Phil has seen his shadow. Thank God for that.

In the beginning of the piece, Marie is crossing paths with a serpent. I donít know...
Forum: Poetry 02-01-2013, 07:35 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 544
Posted By LaughinJim
Don't you miss our old enemies? I've grown quite...

Don't you miss our old enemies? I've grown quite nostalgix for the Lizards of the East and the Kremlin Gremlins.

Have you heard from your old boss? The newspapers say that he died but I think he...
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2013, 06:27 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 802
Posted By LaughinJim
Very well done, Adeetee. You took some very...

Very well done, Adeetee. You took some very complex emotions and thoughts and handled them adeptly. If this indeed was a suicide, the emotions were strange, emptiness rather than depression and...
Forum: Poetry 01-31-2013, 11:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 544
Posted By LaughinJim
Jewelry, Soviet Jewlery, as Emily LaTella once...

Jewelry, Soviet Jewlery, as Emily LaTella once spoke of. No croxxes allowed, only superstars like you or the occasional hammer and sickle.
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-31-2013, 01:04 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,829
Posted By LaughinJim
Dominic, There are three distinct beings...

Dominic,

There are three distinct beings who are all confused as the same one: Satan, Lucifer and the Devil. They are different entirely, and the distinction is not covered in scripture. Some of...
Forum: Poetry 01-31-2013, 11:29 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 434
Posted By LaughinJim
At least you could do like KBR, and put the...

At least you could do like KBR, and put the mispelling in the title.
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-31-2013, 09:55 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,150
Posted By LaughinJim
It appears that the central argument of your...

It appears that the central argument of your paper was that the airlift succeeded only through luck. I'm sure the pilots felt otherwise.

Did you attempt to look up one of the pilots for an...
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-31-2013, 06:11 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,829
Posted By LaughinJim
JnAkers, An important theological note: The...

JnAkers,

An important theological note: The Devil was created to test men. Lucifer is a djinn. A being of pure fire, extremely dangerous and evil.

The thing you said about Satan is correct....
Forum: Poetry 01-31-2013, 05:37 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 544
Posted By LaughinJim
Note from Pedant's Corner There is a...

Note from Pedant's Corner

There is a spelling error in the title that I'm sure was unintended:

till: to prepare soil for planting by turing it over, or what I think you intended, an evolution...
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-31-2013, 03:32 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,829
Posted By LaughinJim
JnAkers: There are no atheists in foxholes. You...

JnAkers: There are no atheists in foxholes. You should talk to a few vets before you post things that. There are many who would tell you that they invoked the name of the Lord everyday, over and...
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-30-2013, 07:54 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,184
Posted By LaughinJim
With that being said...and other segues

Because journalism, in television and radio, requires writing, just as the print media does, I’d like to voice an opinion on an overused and annoying phrase that has permeated news and editorial copy...
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