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Forum: Fiction 04-15-2013, 12:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 703
Posted By Rooster Smith
Very cool scene. I pointed out a lot of...

Very cool scene.

I pointed out a lot of show don't tell issues above. That's the biggest thing, show don't tell.

Another thing is, I would start this scene later, when Manhatten walks into...
Forum: Fiction 04-14-2013, 02:44 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,046
Posted By Rooster Smith
I don't know, 'Dula hasn't been on consistently. ...

I don't know, 'Dula hasn't been on consistently. IN terms of messaging.

GO ahead and post the next ATT if you want. I'll go after.
Forum: Fiction 04-13-2013, 06:54 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,046
Posted By Rooster Smith
Yeah that was pretty good. Right up my alley. ...

Yeah that was pretty good. Right up my alley. What was up with that first person in the middle though? It didn't go anywhere...

Anyway, like the idea, you got a good premise here. I'm glad...
Forum: Fiction 04-07-2013, 05:28 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 706
Posted By Rooster Smith
I don't know man, could the Earth survive the...

I don't know man, could the Earth survive the moon crashing into it? I don't think it could, the fish wouldn't have a planet to be pleased on. I was willing to overlook the the umbrella thing,...
Forum: Board Games 04-06-2013, 06:28 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
Hell yeah, Skully! First episode, where she...

Hell yeah, Skully! First episode, where she thought she was abducted!? Holy crap!!!

Mulder is underrated, great investigator. Agent Cooper is better though, so is twin peaks...

Bruce...
Forum: Fiction 04-06-2013, 06:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 542
Posted By Rooster Smith
Hey, there writer. Gave it a read and decided...

Hey, there writer. Gave it a read and decided not to mark any perticular part of the story with red text. The reason is, every part has the one or two of three really huge problems.

1. ...
Forum: Board Games 04-05-2013, 07:59 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
rated correctly. Red headed women.

rated correctly.

Red headed women.
Forum: Board Games 04-04-2013, 02:48 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
Rated correctly, as much as it can be, not having...

Rated correctly, as much as it can be, not having occurred yet or possibly never occurring.

Rock and Rolling all night followed by partying the following day.
Forum: Fiction 04-04-2013, 10:23 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,565
Posted By Rooster Smith
Yeah, I have a hard time starting the story. Got...

Yeah, I have a hard time starting the story. Got some advice from the absolute write forum about always starting with the POV charector. Maybe my next work will get over that hump. Hoping ...
Forum: Board Games 04-03-2013, 05:18 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
Depends on the bounty hunter. But as a whole...

Depends on the bounty hunter. But as a whole they're over rated. Most have beer guts.

Hulu Plus.
Forum: Fiction 04-03-2013, 11:10 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,565
Posted By Rooster Smith
The movie didn't change my life. Just the way I...

The movie didn't change my life. Just the way I dress. Lots of heels ...
Forum: Fiction 04-03-2013, 11:09 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,437
Posted By Rooster Smith
Tough to say how to write actions scenes. I...

Tough to say how to write actions scenes. I think George RR Martin does them well.

I suggest cherographing the whole scene in your head. I've got some good feedback in the past for a lightsaber...
Forum: Fiction 04-02-2013, 07:18 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,437
Posted By Rooster Smith
Props for getting it into 2000 words. ...

Props for getting it into 2000 words.

There were some cool elements in it. The bad guy had an interesting deal. ( And that's coming from me, I love wall street. Not every wall street cowboy...
Forum: Fiction 04-02-2013, 06:48 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 453
Posted By Rooster Smith
Love it. Frankenfuter fan. edit: this was...

Love it. Frankenfuter fan.

edit: this was a response to the other thread. Botched that.
Forum: Fiction 04-02-2013, 06:47 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 913
Posted By Rooster Smith
thanks andy. I try to create easy reads but it's...

thanks andy. I try to create easy reads but it's a difficult balance.
Forum: Board Games 04-02-2013, 06:46 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
Unicorns are underrated. A Unicorn will mess you...

Unicorns are underrated. A Unicorn will mess you up. Read Stardust sometime.

Punk Rock.
Forum: Fiction 04-02-2013, 09:31 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,565
Posted By Rooster Smith
Haha, thanks rabbit, made the change on my blog. ...

Haha, thanks rabbit, made the change on my blog.

Appreciate the feedback.
Forum: Fiction 04-01-2013, 09:18 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 453
Posted By Rooster Smith
Me and dula never discussed it. I'd say,...

Me and dula never discussed it.

I'd say, message him, see if he wants to go next, and wait a couple of days.

Two or three.

Thanks for the enthussiasm. I don't know much about rain...
Forum: Fiction 04-01-2013, 08:10 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 453
Posted By Rooster Smith
Icon5 ATT 9: A Jedi From Hell (Language and content)

George Lucas was watching Return of the Jedi in his living room.

I should make another trilogy, he thought to himself.

Suddenly a bright light flashed across the room and a dirt bike...
Forum: Fiction 04-01-2013, 06:01 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,565
Posted By Rooster Smith
Icon5 Episode 50: 400 Abortions (Language, content) from the Creek Series

Hey everyone, This is the first installment of the new Shit Creek Series.

All feedback appreciated, please leave a link to your own work and I'll return the favor.

Five years have passed...
Forum: Board Games 04-01-2013, 04:55 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
:banghead: YOu have to see that movie .... ...

:banghead: YOu have to see that movie ....

insanity is rated insanely.

Push Ups.
Forum: Board Games 03-31-2013, 06:22 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
under rated. Still a huge part of the world...

under rated. Still a huge part of the world economy.

Trains, Planes and Automobiles
Forum: Board Games 03-31-2013, 04:49 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
rated correctly. And regarded highly. The...

rated correctly. And regarded highly.

The juice still left over in the pickle jar.
Forum: Fiction 03-31-2013, 04:47 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 651
Posted By Rooster Smith
Your choice, I'll bang one out on Monday if you...

Your choice, I'll bang one out on Monday if you don't wanna go first. I'm putting the finishing touched on my next post right now.
Forum: Board Games 03-30-2013, 05:21 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 3,547
Posted By Rooster Smith
under rated. Just too awesome. Neil Gaiman

under rated. Just too awesome.

Neil Gaiman
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