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Forum: Tips & Advice 08-28-2016, 11:36 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 3,011
Posted By SardonicWriter
For a time, I would write with music in the...

For a time, I would write with music in the background, playing through my earpods. The music I would listen to wouldn't be particularly emotional no inspiring, it was music that I found provocative...
Forum: Fiction 08-16-2016, 02:49 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,049
Posted By SardonicWriter
Second Paragraph/Second Sentence: "She was never...

Second Paragraph/Second Sentence: "She was never afforded the gift of lungs, or heart, or blood or bone."
There is just too much comma action going on here and the use of "or", while poetic, is...
Forum: Fiction 08-16-2016, 01:49 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,049
Posted By SardonicWriter
I must say, I'm really very intrigued and...

I must say, I'm really very intrigued and captivated by work. Through your writing style and syntax, you've managed to maintain a steady rhythm and flow in the structure of your work. I also agree...
Forum: Fiction 08-15-2016, 02:52 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 548
Posted By SardonicWriter
Ignore Hellfire. As far as originality...

Ignore Hellfire.

As far as originality goes, there's nothing quite too special here, the exception being the ending which made me go "Oh". Grammar and spelling mistakes are not too prevalent,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-12-2016, 05:56 PM
Replies: 9,062
Views: 244,129
Posted By SardonicWriter
Sade Cherish the Day

Sade

Cherish the Day
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-12-2016, 05:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,823
Posted By SardonicWriter
All quiet on The Western Front. Quite...

All quiet on The Western Front.

Quite graphic imagery depicted in this novel, I must say.

The cafeteria scene near the beginning of the novel; one of the characters was wanting to get a second...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-12-2016, 05:13 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 3,698
Posted By SardonicWriter
Congregate. The black sheep congregate dusk...

Congregate.

The black sheep congregate dusk and dawn.
Forum: Introductions 08-01-2016, 01:28 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 565
Posted By SardonicWriter
Happy to be here!

I made this account a while back in January of this year but have put off posting anything because of, put simply, procrastination. But now, several months later and still writing, albeit slowly, the...
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