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Forum: Fiction 06-11-2017, 06:44 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 719
Posted By BluebellCharm
Yep, your bang on there. I guess I rushed the...

Yep, your bang on there. I guess I rushed the end. That obviously sounds much better and makes a lot more sense.

Thanks Mr P.
Forum: Fiction 06-10-2017, 02:30 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 719
Posted By BluebellCharm
Attempt at Flash Fiction

Okay so just having an experiment really. Never tried flash fiction before but thought I'd have a go. This is a completely unedited version. Any advice as to where i'm going wrong would be...
Forum: Fiction 02-13-2017, 11:59 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 880
Posted By BluebellCharm
Hey, thanks BP. So glad I'm starting to move in...

Hey, thanks BP. So glad I'm starting to move in the right direction now. I've just read through it again and noticed a ton of errors but can't edit now, which is as annoying as an itch that needs a...
Forum: Fiction 02-11-2017, 02:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 880
Posted By BluebellCharm
Ring of Roses (1409 words)

So I really hope you don't mind me posting my rubbish yet again, but I have been practising what advice I've got and want to see if it's working. I've tried hard to take out words I think might be...
Forum: Fiction 02-07-2017, 01:08 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,123
Posted By BluebellCharm
Guys, thank you so much for the advice....

Guys, thank you so much for the advice. Invaluable as always.

I'm thinking bad habits die hard with me as I can't seem to stop over describing by using unnecessary words!
Obviously the grammar...
Forum: Fiction 02-05-2017, 01:11 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,123
Posted By BluebellCharm
The Visitor (1286 words)

So here is yet another attempt at improving my novice writing skills. I'm trying to take on board constructive criticism but know it's a very long road ahead. As always, I totally understand my...
Forum: Introductions 12-10-2016, 02:46 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,911
Posted By BluebellCharm
Hi Emy, welcome to WB :) Look forward to seeing...

Hi Emy, welcome to WB :) Look forward to seeing you around x
Forum: Writers' Cafe 11-24-2016, 01:10 PM
Replies: 9,617
Views: 302,343
Posted By BluebellCharm
Break stuff - Limp bizkit

Break stuff - Limp bizkit
Forum: Board Games 10-26-2016, 02:18 PM
Replies: 59
Views: 15,802
Posted By BluebellCharm
we all just ran! Why do you all run when the...

we all just ran!

Why do you all run when the tall man with the long hair and the white face....
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-26-2016, 02:01 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 4,832
Posted By BluebellCharm
Addiction

So, I have my own experiences of addiction however for research purposes I could do with a varied opinion. So my question is if you have ever had any kind of addiction, did you give up your addiction...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-13-2016, 02:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,349
Posted By BluebellCharm
I'm definitely scared of clowns. Why, I have no...

I'm definitely scared of clowns. Why, I have no idea? Maybe it's because of the gregarious grin that could be concealing a sinister side or the fact they are able to hide behind an expressionless...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-05-2016, 03:17 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 4,059
Posted By BluebellCharm
I've drunk alcohol since I was 15yrs old and I am...

I've drunk alcohol since I was 15yrs old and I am now 41. There has been countless times I have been so inebriated that I have not known what I was doing!

Being the offspring of an alcoholic...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-29-2016, 03:34 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,641
Posted By BluebellCharm
Oh my word! This sounds a somewhat strange...

Oh my word! This sounds a somewhat strange fetish!

I haven't any strange story to tell apart from a guy who wanted me to 'suck his thumb'. I only did it once but was slightly freaked out by how...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-29-2016, 01:40 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 5,136
Posted By BluebellCharm
Are you serious? Wow, that must have been...

Are you serious? Wow, that must have been painful!

I have loads but all of them have a meaning to me personally. A new tat would need to be significant for me to imprint that baby onto my body...
Forum: Board Games 05-24-2016, 01:20 PM
Replies: 9,470
Views: 208,817
Posted By BluebellCharm
all over her

all over her
Forum: Board Games 05-24-2016, 01:18 PM
Replies: 12,883
Views: 248,818
Posted By BluebellCharm
Inconceivable

Inconceivable
Forum: Fiction 05-24-2016, 01:10 PM
Replies: 75
Views: 13,265
Posted By BluebellCharm
I would definitely keep reading but then this...

I would definitely keep reading but then this style of writing is just up my street!

It looks as though you have changed a thing or two judging by the comments but I do think the chapters could...
Forum: Board Games 05-11-2016, 12:45 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,507
Posted By BluebellCharm
Owned

Owned
Forum: Board Games 05-11-2016, 12:43 PM
Replies: 12,883
Views: 248,818
Posted By BluebellCharm
twice

twice
Forum: Board Games 04-27-2016, 02:51 PM
Replies: 120
Views: 19,994
Posted By BluebellCharm
I'll give you much more than a spanking!

I'll give you much more than a spanking!
Forum: Board Games 04-27-2016, 02:48 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 244,507
Posted By BluebellCharm
President

President
Forum: Board Games 04-27-2016, 02:43 PM
Replies: 9,470
Views: 208,817
Posted By BluebellCharm
she had intended

she had intended
Forum: The Library 04-27-2016, 02:41 PM
Replies: 90
Views: 25,371
Posted By BluebellCharm
Loved to make up stories from as far back as I...

Loved to make up stories from as far back as I can remember but my first ever influence was at 12 years old reading Shaun Hutson books. I'm guessing no-one will know who the fuck that is!
Well he's...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-23-2016, 02:30 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,087
Posted By BluebellCharm
Loving that idea Max! I was kinda wondering about...

Loving that idea Max! I was kinda wondering about the direction that was taking so that could make sense now. Thanks for the input and getting my brain whirring :)
Forum: Board Games 04-23-2016, 02:20 PM
Replies: 120
Views: 19,994
Posted By BluebellCharm
I'm going to wear this.

I'm going to wear this.
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