WritersBeat.com
 

Go Back   WritersBeat.com > Search Forums


Showing results 1 to 25 of 105
Search took 0.01 seconds.
Search: Posts Made By: Annamarth
Forum: Fiction 11-23-2017, 04:37 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 603
Posted By Annamarth
That's the thing, or your inner voice disagrees...

That's the thing, or your inner voice disagrees with your common sense.
Forum: Fiction 11-21-2017, 07:31 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 603
Posted By Annamarth
Goodness, thanks for your comments it really...

Goodness, thanks for your comments it really helps. Sometimes I wonder if I am just following a pipe dream, to want to write stories. My next step is to be consistent. I fix one problem, (last time...
Forum: Fiction 11-20-2017, 08:52 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 603
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Chapter 26

Joanne glared at her watch, willing the time to slow down. This Sunday the pack was taking their sweet time to return from their weekly run in the woods. A merciless sun beat down on the open area,...
Forum: Fiction 09-23-2017, 11:24 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,010
Posted By Annamarth
You are right, I do speak another language, and I...

You are right, I do speak another language, and I am influenced by the time I spent in the company of people speaking a specific language.

Chapter word count? I am still working on it.
...
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2017, 11:06 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,010
Posted By Annamarth
Thanks, I have also been asked if I am a male or...

Thanks, I have also been asked if I am a male or female,I want to remain a mystery. LOL
Forum: Fiction 09-18-2017, 02:50 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,010
Posted By Annamarth
Eventually yes, but this story has a life of it's...

Eventually yes, but this story has a life of it's own and I am still enjoying the ride.
Forum: Fiction 09-13-2017, 01:05 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,010
Posted By Annamarth
It was such a long time since I posted Chapter 24...

It was such a long time since I posted Chapter 24 that I decided last night to post Chapter 25, mistakes and all before I lose my nerve and never post again. I did wonder if I should have added the...
Forum: Fiction 09-12-2017, 07:38 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,010
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Chapter 25

Joanne stood on the dew wet grass, opened her arms wide and gave in to the nervous energy that buzzed through her body. She twirled on the spot like an exuberant child. After a couple of wobbly...
Forum: Fiction 06-08-2017, 06:55 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 485
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Chapter 24

Xavier stormed past Winslow’s assistant’s desk and thrust the wooden door open. He entered with such drive that the panel banged against the wall. A loud WHACK echoed around the office and was...
Forum: Fiction 04-09-2017, 11:48 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 890
Posted By Annamarth
Hi. I really appreciate comments and advice. ...

Hi. I really appreciate comments and advice. With chapter 22 I had complaints that the story’s pace was too slow. I am also trying to create an ebb and flow, but it seems my readers do not like a...
Forum: Fiction 04-02-2017, 06:25 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 890
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 23

The SUV’s tires spun on the loose gravel as he drove out of the pack clubhouse’ parking lot. Small gravel stones pinged against the wheels of the other vehicles waiting for their drivers. Xavier...
Forum: Fiction 02-27-2017, 02:50 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,751
Posted By Annamarth
I love the comments and advice. This helps me a...

I love the comments and advice. This helps me a lot and gets me out of my head.



Okay, why the question if I am a guy? The first few chapters were in the POV of the Joanne, the last few...
Forum: Fiction 02-20-2017, 01:21 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,751
Posted By Annamarth
Thanks for the comments. I am working on the...

Thanks for the comments. I am working on the showing not telling, but I missed the plot with this chapter. Xavier will have to behave in the next Chapter. When you speak to authors, they like to...
Forum: Fiction 01-15-2017, 08:14 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,751
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 22

Xavier knew he had to decide once and for all how he was going to tackle his mating problem. The choice hung over his head and fogged up his brain. He needed a clear mind to focus on the search for...
Forum: Fiction 01-07-2017, 06:11 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 985
Posted By Annamarth
I cannot fix the lines. Apologies.

I cannot fix the lines. Apologies.
Forum: Fiction 01-07-2017, 05:31 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 985
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 21

“What?” asked Xavier, he kept his face blank as he walked into the room.


“Something is off. I do not think you are telling us everything,” said Ted with the confidence many years friendship...
Forum: Fiction 01-07-2017, 05:27 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 900
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 21

“What?” asked Xavier, he kept his face blank as he walked into the room.
“Something is off. I do not think you are telling us everything,” said Ted with the confidence many years friendship gave...
Forum: Fiction 01-07-2017, 05:22 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,350
Posted By Annamarth
Wow, thanks. Constructive criticism is welcome. ...

Wow, thanks. Constructive criticism is welcome. I hope you can hear the different voices. Years of writing minutes of meetings have dulled people's voices, and it is fun to find them again.
Forum: Fiction 12-16-2016, 04:33 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,350
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 20

The two vehicles left the forest camp in quick succession. The team split up, some traveled in the SE van and the rest rode with Eric and Michael. They agreed to meet at Xavier’s home to do the group...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-02-2016, 12:49 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,575
Posted By Annamarth
Hi, I did not see this post, and work has been...

Hi, I did not see this post, and work has been challenging. Please remind me what this was this about?
Forum: Fiction 11-24-2016, 12:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 828
Posted By Annamarth
Thanks, will fix, my format changed when I...

Thanks, will fix, my format changed when I posted, it. Sorry no excuse. Your input has made my day.
Forum: Fiction 11-22-2016, 08:03 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 828
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 19

Xavier stood at the edge of the woods looking across the forestry compound, unaware that he touched the small scar on his right temple. Ever since he moved to Wolfville, he found it difficult to...
Forum: Fiction 09-15-2016, 06:09 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 644
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 18

“Oh my, God, please help me! I made such a huge mistake,” prayed Joanne as she gripped the pole so as not to lose her balance as the train accelerated out of the station. The carriage rattled and...
Forum: Fiction 08-20-2016, 04:48 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 584
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 17

“What the hell,” snapped Joanne as she pushed past Xavier, exhausted and irritated beyond reason with Shifters and their attitudes. He turned around and came to stand close behind her, ignoring the...
Forum: Fiction 08-01-2016, 11:08 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 581
Posted By Annamarth
Fantasy Novel: Whistlestop Chapter 16

The grey autumn day suited Joanne’s mood, dull, muted and disconnected to her body. The sky was overcast and the clouds heavy with water that dampened the sounds around her,

“I knew, I...
Showing results 1 to 25 of 105

 

All times are GMT -8. The time now is 06:37 AM.

vBulletin, Copyright © 2000-2006, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.