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Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-19-2014, 03:35 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,839
Posted By Thewritingkid
I never use a tree as a catapult.

I never use a tree as a catapult.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-12-2014, 07:57 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,861
Posted By Thewritingkid
Exactly! I mean, Goblet of Fire? Remember the...

Exactly! I mean, Goblet of Fire? Remember the sphinx? I'd love to have seen that in the film.


Oh well, maybe since the movies are without a doubt going to be remade within our lifetimes, maybe...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 09-10-2014, 05:23 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 966
Posted By Thewritingkid
I need better motivations for my villiains.

So, any good story needs an antagonist, a villain if you will, in some way, shape or form to challenge the character, create conflicts for them, etc. And of course, part of this requires their...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-05-2014, 02:21 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 2,165
Posted By Thewritingkid
Or maybe are you having a grey old time? ...

Or maybe are you having a grey old time?


...I see the door.
Forum: Fiction 09-02-2014, 03:46 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 483
Posted By Thewritingkid
I thought it was very, very descriptive of Jane's...

I thought it was very, very descriptive of Jane's father. Perhaps you could show us a little more than you tell over the course of the story (or how it's necessary to you), but I could understand it,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-02-2014, 03:41 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,648
Posted By Thewritingkid
I had it at red at one point, but now, I don't...

I had it at red at one point, but now, I don't really now. I like all colors.
Forum: Poetry 09-01-2014, 11:48 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,139
Posted By Thewritingkid
I really like the imagery and comparisons you...

I really like the imagery and comparisons you make here in this poem. I think it expresses itself really well.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-31-2014, 09:49 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 2,165
Posted By Thewritingkid
The Grey sisters? (Otherwise known as the Graeae,...

The Grey sisters? (Otherwise known as the Graeae, from Greek mythology?)
Forum: Fiction 08-29-2014, 10:07 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,344
Posted By Thewritingkid
Yes, definitely. I can see it a bit more. Thanks...

Yes, definitely. I can see it a bit more. Thanks for the read!:yes:
Forum: Fiction 08-29-2014, 09:10 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,344
Posted By Thewritingkid
Eh, it just seemed that overall, you didn't paint...

Eh, it just seemed that overall, you didn't paint a big enough picture of the surroundings. I like how you implied some of the character traits, and maybe you could do the same for the setting?
Forum: Introductions 08-29-2014, 08:34 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 731
Posted By Thewritingkid
Hello, Howard! Good to see another author on...

Hello, Howard! Good to see another author on here. I hope you like it here!:biggrin:
Forum: Fiction 08-29-2014, 08:26 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,344
Posted By Thewritingkid
I feel like it's formatted a bit choppily, but I...

I feel like it's formatted a bit choppily, but I enjoyed reading it. I like the sense of the characters you give to us in the short few sentences you had. I think it lacked in description, though....
Forum: The Library 08-29-2014, 07:46 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 5,751
Posted By Thewritingkid
I've never read the book, but I want to. There...

I've never read the book, but I want to. There aren't many good dinosaur or paleontology books out there that I've heard of, and I would definitely like to look into them. As for the movie, well,...
Forum: Fiction 08-29-2014, 04:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 762
Posted By Thewritingkid
I feel like you showed more than you told, and I...

I feel like you showed more than you told, and I couldn't help but notice a few typos, but I am definitely intrigued by this story, and I want to read more. How does the A.I work out? How will it...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-29-2014, 02:44 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,794
Posted By Thewritingkid
I think "age is just a number" is not a bad...

I think "age is just a number" is not a bad saying. That's really all it is. A number. I mean, I'm not saying the next leader of the world should be five, but relatively speaking, I don't think...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-26-2014, 06:36 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,861
Posted By Thewritingkid
Well, I guess. I take issue with the fact that...

Well, I guess. I take issue with the fact that they changed all the character's ages, as if they won't go near young characters who Oh my God they have a legitimate personality and character ahhh!"...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-26-2014, 03:07 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,861
Posted By Thewritingkid
Books made into movies.

This past weekend, I went and saw The Giver, following the latest trend of books turned into movies, and it was an alright movie, all things considered. It did fall prey to...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-24-2014, 04:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,320
Posted By Thewritingkid
Legos. Lots and lots of Legos. I want to get some...

Legos. Lots and lots of Legos. I want to get some sets even now...
Forum: Introductions 08-23-2014, 02:13 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 737
Posted By Thewritingkid
Hello, Christopher. Can I call you poet? ...

Hello, Christopher. Can I call you poet?
Anyway, welcome here. Hope you can find some really good ways to improve your writing here.
Forum: Character Clinics 08-21-2014, 03:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,557
Posted By Thewritingkid
What do you know about the person on the phone?...

What do you know about the person on the phone? What did he/she sound like? What did he/she say specifically?
Also, you seem pretty faithful. Who brought you up in Christian faith? What's your...
Forum: Board Games 08-18-2014, 07:01 PM
Replies: 1,887
Views: 54,578
Posted By Thewritingkid
No, but I kind of want to. Daredevil attitude,...

No, but I kind of want to. Daredevil attitude, and all of that.

Have you ever met anyone notable?
Forum: Character Clinics 08-15-2014, 09:59 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,803
Posted By Thewritingkid
Well, first, I said Posthumans. I'd just like to...

Well, first, I said Posthumans. I'd just like to clear that up. As I said, rumors have been floating around of something that gives you these powers. As far as I know, it's permanent. And it's...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-13-2014, 08:09 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,637
Posted By Thewritingkid
Painfully slow. I plan on having dozens of...

Painfully slow. I plan on having dozens of stories featuring my characters who probably approach a similar number without even exaggerating, and so far I'm only two "chapters" into my third story....
Forum: Character Clinics 08-13-2014, 04:38 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,803
Posted By Thewritingkid
What makes me mad? People comparing me to some...

What makes me mad? People comparing me to some damn orphan, like Batman. One of the others called me out on not caring as I have no parents, I nearly went ballistic on him. What else? Well, this only...
Forum: Character Clinics 08-13-2014, 03:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,803
Posted By Thewritingkid
No, I haven't killed anything sentient. At least...

No, I haven't killed anything sentient. At least not yet, but with everything going on, I'm not sure if I will be able to keep it so for long. I like to think I'm rather peaceful, only defending...
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