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Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-17-2014, 02:32 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 2,295
Posted By Teancor
Team Brian

dantotheyell,
Jessica chose team Brian in a grand public outburst. I like the idea the story and the moral, but here are a few thoughts on how you could make this better.
People like to read...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-17-2014, 02:17 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,600
Posted By Teancor
No bonuses for you

thebluntrolled,
I thought this started out just a bit like the beginning of Toy Story. It quickly changed but I couldn't help thinking of it.
This was a shocker. I thought something bad...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-17-2014, 02:08 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,470
Posted By Teancor
Bellumview, This started out engaging and...

Bellumview,
This started out engaging and here are a few parts that I especially liked:




But I found myself lost at the end. Did a random guy just shoot him. Was he hiding out from a...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-17-2014, 01:12 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,722
Posted By Teancor
Icon10 Bel, Just did a re-read on this one. Oh it...

Bel,
Just did a re-read on this one. Oh it is soooo good! It made me laugh out loud all over again.

Teancor :D

They are mostly named after their mothers..... I am still laughing about...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-17-2014, 12:48 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,853
Posted By Teancor
Mattress aspirations

Winterbite,
Great piece. It made me chuckle to thing the pillow could reincarnate.
But it wants to be a mattress really? What, like the princess and the pea mattress? Or a Las Vegas hotel...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-17-2014, 12:34 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,898
Posted By Teancor
Icon7 The Rescue

White RabitNinja,
Cleverly Mischievous. The MC got revenge and saved a poor prisoner. Fun story.
Teancor:biggrin:
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 06-26-2013, 05:51 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 6,601
Posted By Teancor
This meant something different after reading the...

This meant something different after reading the ending. Well done.

Gloryia,
Great short story. Very enjoyable.
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 11-24-2012, 07:10 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,750
Posted By Teancor
Anyone up for a new mystery? :detective:

Anyone up for a new mystery?

:detective:
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 11-21-2012, 12:39 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,296
Posted By Teancor
Challenge #49 The colors of Thanksgiving.

Hank Johnson's skobeloff eyes were wide open. He lay in bed thinking of Scarlett. He pictured how her chestnut hair cascaded onto her shoulders. Even in the faint charcoal light of the morning Hank...
Forum: Non-Fiction 04-19-2011, 03:11 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 16,114
Posted By Teancor
When to tape?

Hellstorm,
Should I go around with my wrists taped all of the time? or should I ask for a minute to tape them after I have insulted that big goon at the bar?

Teancor? :D
Forum: Free Writing 04-19-2011, 02:59 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,045
Posted By Teancor
Mountain of horse poo

If you think Seabiscuit is boring then why in the world would you be interested in a coin flipper. That is absurd. This cliche story has already been done anyway. Balls of fury, Dodgeball, and Over...
Forum: Fiction 04-19-2011, 02:34 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,555
Posted By Teancor
Mistborn, Thanks for a unique and...

Mistborn,
Thanks for a unique and entertaining read. There were parts of your Batboy that were golden and there were parts that grated on me. I'm no professional, so take these comments for what...
Forum: Fiction 04-19-2011, 01:41 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,206
Posted By Teancor
Indian Quiet

Nick,
Hey I liked your opening line. Although it may not be politically correct, I think it described the situation nicely. Also it gives away your age (maybe) most nowdays would say Ninja quiet...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-18-2011, 08:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,411
Posted By Teancor
Preston, Nice job leading us down the aisle...

Preston,
Nice job leading us down the aisle thinking it was the groom all along. I was actually surprised to see that it was the priest. I see now the bits of clues that you left along the way....
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-18-2011, 08:05 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,334
Posted By Teancor
Night Wanderer, I might have to check myself...

Night Wanderer,
I might have to check myself into rehab after reading that.

Remove your hats and keep your arms and legs inside at all times, your story is quite the ride. You went from dark...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 05-11-2010, 09:36 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,189
Posted By Teancor
Bel, It is great to see you are back. P&C...

Bel,
It is great to see you are back. P&C has been a little different since you left.

I am ready for some of those hilarious Alien stories or whatever your genius is ready to dish out....
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-22-2010, 04:13 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,125
Posted By Teancor
Well you gave it a good try, and pretty well done...

Well you gave it a good try, and pretty well done at that. What did you mean by "go blind"? I didn't get that part.

Teancor
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-21-2010, 06:08 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,125
Posted By Teancor
You left a few "G's" in there I think I found...

You left a few "G's" in there I think I found them all. Your story started out interesting but you soon lost me. I wanted something to happen, more than just "he went home".

Teancor :biggrin:
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-03-2010, 08:54 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,102
Posted By Teancor
Devon, Hey I just checked around a little....

Devon,
Hey I just checked around a little. Did a little detective work, you might say. I went with the oldest thread that I could find. It was Dec 14th 2005. Still just a guess....

So did we...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-02-2010, 01:04 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,102
Posted By Teancor
Okay.... my guess: December 14th 2005? ...

Okay.... my guess: December 14th 2005?

AmIright? AmIright?

Teancor :smartass:
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-02-2010, 12:30 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 3,750
Posted By Teancor
It's high time we had a new mystery! Firefly...

It's high time we had a new mystery! Firefly where is the mystery, you promised us?

Beuller...? Beuller...? Fry....? Fry.....?

Who is going to step up to the plate and give a mystery?
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-02-2010, 08:42 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,417
Posted By Teancor
Redlorry, Maybe it's too early, but I don't...

Redlorry,
Maybe it's too early, but I don't get it. This one sentence didn't make sense to me. Can you explain it?




Teancor :shifty:
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-01-2010, 11:31 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,189
Posted By Teancor
Poor girl

Poor girl is right. But then again, she kinda deserved it....

Teancor :biggrin:

Thanks for commenting midwestamp.
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 04-01-2010, 07:01 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,022
Posted By Teancor
Peep!

JillW,
Welcome to WB! Way to jump right in. You knocked this challenge right out of the park. Nice job. You have a good style and voice. I noticed that you made a bunch of comments too. That is...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 03-31-2010, 03:30 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 876
Posted By Teancor
Sick and Wrong

You win! I hope that nobody can top it. That was the worst mental image I have had in a long time. Awful! Just plain wrong....

However, I don't have a complaint with the writing. That was fine....
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